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A dazzling blaze sews magic on warm eyes. Hurdles were solved, and secret vows were heard. I won't steer the yarns while holy denies. My cheers are shorn, and my heart is averred. All musings are being wrecked with a sword. Bumptious, you believe, life tricks may apply. So shut your eyes and bear yourself a few dries. Earth life has an aim, yet we trust God's may. You've swayed me; you hand a heavenly prize. The stinks of anguish seep from veins and blood. Astute thrives, teaching groups of soul and rise. Bunk time dawdled on, yet death stalled ahead. At which wayward tears of memory scoured. Once the grave prodding heads him to comply, How pointless would it be if no one believes? Earth life has an aim, yet we trust God's may. My inward beasts are swamped forward to seize. I'm battling, yet my dense wheezes are heard. We've pleaded with God for such a glimpse guise. Too long, psyche harm has been our swear word. Is it taut to earn a clear slant on the board? Where has our keen the past sunk to decay? Is it tough to grab a clear view of ties? Earth life has an aim, yet we trust God's may. This deep yearning proves that there is inbred. Believe that God is love concealed in the sky. Coldness and loneliness on a stark sled, Earth life has an aim, yet we trust God's may.
Written: December 28, 2021 ''B'' Forms, 10 Plus lines Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Date: 1/20/2022 10:56:00 AM
Lasaad, congratulations on your First Place win in my contest B Forms with this beautiful poem, I love the image too ~Constance
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Date: 1/11/2022 8:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a lovely write and picture. Have a blessed day...........................
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Date: 1/11/2022 7:58:00 AM
Congratulations, Lasaad!
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Date: 1/10/2022 8:58:00 PM
WoW! Lasaad, You have penned such a deep and well written write. Good lines, especially the last three. Congratulations on a well-deserved win. Have a great day:-)Alexis
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Date: 1/10/2022 8:10:00 PM
Great and long ballad. "stinks of anguish seep from veins and blood" - Great verse. Congratulations!
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Date: 12/29/2021 5:24:00 AM
A poem of deep dialogue and yearning. All the best, Lasaad.
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Date: 12/29/2021 3:14:00 AM
Plenty to reflect on in your verse Lasaad, I do believe that our earth life is some sort of test to prepare for the next one. Tom
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Date: 12/29/2021 12:22:00 AM
A deep poem though I feel God lives in us. Best for a win.
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Date: 12/28/2021 10:05:00 PM
Such a beautiful verse , very inspirational. Good luck in Constance contest. Happy New Year Wishes
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