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Also known as a furze-pig, urchin or hedgepig Your collective name is an array or prickle – how apt! To me you are one of the cutest animals in the land Born blind but soon you open beady black eyes Your little snout pokes out and helps you forage You love to eat worms, caterpillars and snails Sometimes a tasty frog, baby bird or eggs Your body is covered in defensive prickly spines These are prone to fleas, oh that would make me itch! Curling into a ball at the first sign of danger Badgers, foxes and owls are your main predators How I love the autumn, I find you nestled in the hedgerows You sleep until you come out to play at night Sometimes I wish I was like you and could hibernate Sleep though the cold dull dreary dark winter days You communicate by squealing, grunting and snuffling … (I wonder… are all hedgehogs male!) Sadly you are not very adept at crossing the road I often see you as road kill and that makes me sad 09~29~14 Contest: Animal Poem Sponsor: Regina Riddle ~awarded 3rd Place ~

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Date: 10/4/2014 1:28:00 AM
You chose a very unique and interesting animal to write about, Jan. I enjoyed learning more about those cute little critters!.... This brought to mind the video game character, Sonic the Hedgehog. But, he was far too fast to ever be road kill!.... Congrats on your win with this great write! Hugs :)
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Date: 10/4/2014 3:53:00 AM
Many thanks Kelly - oh yes i remember sonic the hedgehog too LOL. Hugs Jan xxx
Date: 10/1/2014 4:49:00 AM
Very sweet write on hedge hog, congrats on the win, Jan
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Date: 10/1/2014 8:08:00 AM
Many thanks for dropping by to comment Dr Mehta:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/1/2014 12:04:00 AM
Congrats, Jan and I love your poem. Happy writing and God bless you. With love and prayers, ~ Gina
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Date: 10/1/2014 1:09:00 AM
Thanks Regina I had a lot of fun writing this:-) Hugs Jan xxx
Date: 9/30/2014 7:20:00 PM
Congrats Jan on this lovely win...hugs Tim
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Date: 10/1/2014 1:08:00 AM
Thanks Tim:-) Hugs jan xxx
Date: 9/30/2014 7:04:00 PM
Congrats for your win with this adorable animal.
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Date: 10/1/2014 1:08:00 AM
Thanks Andrea:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/30/2014 5:36:00 PM
Well looks like Cas and I got it right. CONGRATULATIONS on your win. You hedged out a lot of other poems not that your a hog...CONGRATULATIONS
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Date: 9/30/2014 5:41:00 PM
I am delighted with my podium place - Maurice you are required to help the musky tears are mauriceless and need a humourous write to join in our fun its hard, soft, sticky wet.... oh the anticipation!!!! hugs Jan xxx
Date: 9/30/2014 4:55:00 PM
Jan, what a sweet poem about a hedge hog. Very nicely done and so informative too. Congratulations on your win! Sandra
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Date: 9/30/2014 4:57:00 PM
Many thanks for the lovely comment Sandra:-) Hugs Jan xxx
Date: 9/30/2014 3:40:00 PM
Congratulations on your win for this sweet poem Jan. You're on a roll. Fantastic job.XXOO
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Date: 9/30/2014 3:49:00 PM
I'm on cloud 9 at the moment Brenda - this place is keeping me sane - things at home not good but I'm coping fine :-) hugs Jan xxx
Date: 9/30/2014 1:47:00 PM
Such a lovely sweet poem Jan. I love them, they are so cute.
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Date: 9/30/2014 1:49:00 PM
They are so cute and I don't have any pets so I thought I would write on a wild animal:-) Hugs Jan xxx
Date: 9/30/2014 10:02:00 AM
really lighting beautifully painted piece love hedgehogs my dad had a pet one for years in the winter or harsh times it used to scrape at the door for food wonderful little creatures they are
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Date: 9/30/2014 11:07:00 AM
Thanks Liam for your lovely comment:-) I thought I would do a wild animal as I don't have any pets and we had a hedgehog on the lawn on Saturday and that prompted my poem:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/29/2014 8:01:00 PM
That picture, seals the deal for me. I want to SEE a real hedgehog. You got first place from me too.
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Date: 9/30/2014 1:09:00 AM
Aww thanks Maurice - YOU inspired me to find a picture i didn't realise you don't have these cute creatures too:-) Hugs jan xxx
Date: 9/29/2014 4:51:00 PM
Wow, I feel so educated! I dont think we have hedgehogs around here, I've seen them at pet stores occasionally. They are sooo cute. You're poem was perfect, I would give you first place right now! Your awesome lady, hugsxx
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Date: 9/29/2014 4:55:00 PM
Aww thanks Casarah - they are just so cute and when Maurice said he'd never seen one I discovered how to download a picture to go with the poem:-) Hugs Jan xxx
Date: 9/29/2014 4:21:00 PM
cute and humorous...maybe Brits are a tad funny :).....hugs Tim
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Date: 9/29/2014 4:26:00 PM
I hope I fall into the humourous category - not sure about cute though lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/29/2014 4:19:00 PM
Hedgehogs are indeed lovely creatures.Always wished to have one and keep it,but was never allowed.Unfortunately they are prone to car accidents,so true.An original take on,and definitely sweet.
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Date: 9/29/2014 4:24:00 PM
I think its only the second time I've seen one in our garden Charmaine - lots on the road but they are usually sadly flattened:-( hugs Jan xxx
Date: 9/29/2014 3:11:00 PM
awwww, road kill. I am glad to not have seen this in Utah. I suppose it happens but I don't think I ever saw a hedgehog around here. I love the line asking if all of them are males. So apt!!! Cute writing, Jan.
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Date: 9/29/2014 3:17:00 PM
I couldn't resist THAT line Andrea lol:-) Thanks for your lovely comment. Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/29/2014 3:13:00 PM
Look at the time of both of our comments. What do they say about great minds...
Date: 9/29/2014 3:11:00 PM
A hedgy poem right there on the hedge. I have never seen a hedgehog. They sound marvelous. They have to be more careful crossing the road. Great Poem. Educational and informative. Great read.
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Date: 9/29/2014 3:37:00 PM
I have added a picture Maurice:-)
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Date: 9/29/2014 3:16:00 PM
Oh they are so cute Maurice - sadly most times you see them they are squashed flat on the road but we had one walking across the lawn on Saturday night:-) Hugs Jan xxx

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