Heavy Rain

I feel as though i have embarked on a new journey in life, happiness is not permanent, a  
dead end craft rest deeply inside of me. Failure prospers as though i harvest it with a  
vengenance. I am a citizen of pure life, engaging in my own salvation, no longer a  
priveleged fool with a slave mentality. I lust for forgiveness therapy, will i ever be able to  
right my wrongs, making melody in my heart is a steady process but i hear no joyful  
noise.My instruments of love only seem to perform thunderous deceit, suffering is my  
foundation, wounded time is on my side.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Culverhouse Avatar
June 30, 2010 at 5:45 PM
the poem is very long on the page, can you try to put some page breaks in to make it easier to read. Well written though!
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