Heavy Mountain

a mountain can hear
                                       her cries lost in the woods' vault
                                                 cannot lift his ass
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Onclaud Avatar
January 29, 2015 at 2:12 PM
quite puzzling and engaging, rajat... the mountain has a heavy ass?.. huggs
Chakrabarty Avatar
January 31, 2015 at 7:41 AM
Hahaha nette, the mountain was so lazy/heavy he could lift his body although he wanted to help the lady in distress. So, better be not a mountain so far "the damsel in distress" is concerned. love
Dietrich Avatar
January 29, 2015 at 2:07 PM
Is the mountain the one referred to with an ass. That's funny!!
Chakrabarty Avatar
January 31, 2015 at 7:44 AM
The mountain is so heavy that he fails to do his duty here saving the girl. So Andrea run..run..run no fat . Love
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January 31, 2015 at 7:36 AM
No Andrea in fact the ass referred to here has the mountain.Love.
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