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Heavy Is the Air of September Morns

on the downcast of cobalt no rain can fall from cloudless mind i sit here on the edge of morn lingering in this chilled air a september breath weighs heavy as it bends tips of flowers downward their petals stroking the pools of yesterday's rains my lips tasted those rains as i remembered you in passing within fragments of mind that too bend beneath september's breath where this air is heavy and the kisses cold much like death

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Date: 9/3/2019 12:46:00 PM
A bit melancholy poem--it does carry your voice to evoke the feelings you want to communicate, Sandy.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 9/3/2019 12:59:00 PM
Thank you Vijay it started out as a happy write but turned towards sadness. That’s ok my muse penned a happier one later in the day :) hugs
Date: 9/3/2019 10:57:00 AM
I can feel the weight that is falling through this wonderful poem. It leaves an empty space in my heart. Seasons change but it seems that some sad memories that come with those seasons don't. Another wonderful poem Sandy.
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Date: 9/3/2019 11:01:00 AM
the skies are so blue and cloudless here, i wanted to start out with a happy poem but i suppose those thoughts are still in my mind, it rained heavy here yesterday so today's air was very heavy...i had to wipe down most my bus windows today before i could even pull it out of its resting spot

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