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HEAVY HEART

That which is ill-begot will love you not, 
but pull the strings of a heavy heart.

charactercorruptionphilosophyfree verse

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James Inman

December 8, 2015 at 11:21 AM

Wise words CayCay. Well thought out.

CayCay Godwin

December 20, 2015 at 5:44 AM

Hey, James - I thank you. Merry Everything! CayCay

Mark Woods

December 6, 2015 at 1:12 AM

A wonderful line that could bet the start to a magnificent poem. : )

CayCay Godwin

December 6, 2015 at 11:47 PM

Thank you. I never told you that I like your new pic - well, it was new when I first liked it. Be good to yourself ... CayCay

Kim Merryman

December 5, 2015 at 10:01 PM

Well said, CayCay! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

CayCay Godwin

December 6, 2015 at 11:48 PM

Thank you so much, Kim ... CayCay

Michael Tor

December 5, 2015 at 6:57 PM

Wise words CayCay congratulations on your win!!

CayCay Godwin

December 6, 2015 at 11:48 PM

Thank you, my friend. All the best to you and your pen ... CayCay

Andrea Dietrich

December 5, 2015 at 6:37 PM

wow, I really like yours, sweetie!!! Big congrats.

CayCay Godwin

December 6, 2015 at 11:49 PM

That makes me happy - thanks for telling me ... CayCay

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

December 5, 2015 at 5:45 PM

Congratulations CayCay.

CayCay Godwin

December 6, 2015 at 11:49 PM

Nayda - Hi! You are so sweet to offer your congratulations - thank you ... CayCay

Jan Allison

December 5, 2015 at 12:09 PM

Congrats on your win CayCay:-) hugs Jan xx

CayCay Godwin

December 6, 2015 at 11:50 PM

I'm hugging you back ... CayCay

Skat A

December 5, 2015 at 11:21 AM

CayCay.....Lovely win.... Love Skat

CayCay Godwin

December 6, 2015 at 11:50 PM

It is lovely of you to say so - thank you ... CayCay

John Lawless

December 5, 2015 at 11:14 AM

Nicely done CayCay...congrats

CayCay Godwin

December 6, 2015 at 11:51 PM

Thank you, John ... CayCay

Balveen Cheema

December 5, 2015 at 10:28 AM

Love it Cay Cay! Congrats!

CayCay Godwin

December 6, 2015 at 11:51 PM

I'm delighted you told me. Thank you ... CayCay

Sandra Haight

December 5, 2015 at 8:58 AM

Amazing one-liner, CayCay! So very true. Congratulations on your fine win. 7, Hugs, Sandra

CayCay Godwin

December 6, 2015 at 11:52 PM

Hey, my favorite Sandra, for the comments and the 7 and for all you share ... CayCay

Eve Roper

December 5, 2015 at 8:34 AM

Great one line! Congratulations on your win!

CayCay Godwin

December 6, 2015 at 11:52 PM

Eve - I am so glad you like it. Thank you ... CayCay

Paul Callus

December 5, 2015 at 8:22 AM

A great one-liner, CayCay! A troubled conscience never rests. I see from the comments below that this is a winning entry, so congratulations!:) Regards // paul

CayCay Godwin

December 6, 2015 at 11:53 PM

I am delighted that you liked it, Paul. Thank you for taking the time to comment. Are the best ... CayCay

Alexis Y.

December 5, 2015 at 7:48 AM

CayCay, true words indeed. Congratulations on your fine win it was deserved:-) Alexis

CayCay Godwin

December 6, 2015 at 11:58 PM

I sure appreciate your sweet comment. Thank you, Alexis ... CayCay

Casarah Nance

December 5, 2015 at 7:37 AM

Wonderful one liner, grats on your win.

CayCay Godwin

December 6, 2015 at 11:58 PM

Casarah - your comment is most sweet and appreciated ... CayCay

Arthur Vaso

December 5, 2015 at 12:23 AM

Ok, I am very impressed by all the one liners I have read, but this, well this is brilliant! A7

CayCay Godwin

December 5, 2015 at 1:13 AM

It was an awesome thrill to find your comment. I guess any writer would be elated to read such rewarding words. I thank you, Arthur. All the best ... CayCay