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Heavy Going

RoseAnn Malone resolved to lose weight. She made a list of foods to forsake. She did well 'till week four eating more than before. Airlines had to bill her at the freight rate.

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Jan Allison

Date: 12/26/2019 5:38:00 PM

This is absolutely hilarious Paul, it always peeves me that they charge for excess baggage on suitcases but not on people!:-( hugs Jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 12/27/2019 4:58:00 AM

Your pen is golden Paul keep the ink flowing - mine dried up totally recently to the extent I didn't log on to the site for a month:-( hugs Jan xx

Paul Schneiter
Date: 12/26/2019 6:08:00 PM

Thank you, Jan. Hearing from you sends my ego soaring. I'm at that doddering age now, but perhaps there's a poem or two left in me. Your kind response gives me hope. Hugs, Paul.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 12/17/2019 12:59:00 PM

Hello Paul Schneiter, Oh she should not have eaten too much. Now she has paid for the way she is.. She does not sound happy. Merry Christmas. have a nice day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/18/2019 12:28:00 PM

Hello Paul Schneiter, Limericks are hard to create. Well I find it hard to write one. Yet I see nothing wrong with it. Merry Christmas have a nice day my friend.

Paul Schneiter
Date: 12/18/2019 11:01:00 AM

Darlene, thank you for commenting on my limerick. It's not one of my better efforts (muse seems to have abandoned me). I'll try to do better next time.