Heavy Dew

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     Trickling down mine back the heavy dew from the sequoia
for the moment though because I have plans to move far to the left
        so I may feel the trickling on the front of mine hot flesh
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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July 31, 2012 at 11:38 PM
JAMES, stopping by to read a couple of poems. CONGRATULATIONS!! :-) with your featured poem of the week. Goodnight~ LUV~ PD
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July 31, 2012 at 2:03 PM
Sir James, your flesh is eternally hot, even in the veritable rain forest of the sequoia. As usual your write is strictly you and not a thread of anyone else. Needless to say, you are a wonderful one-of-a-kind. Congrats on the selection. daver
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November 9, 2010 at 6:51 PM
A second entry moves to the next round! Well done, James. Love, Carolyn
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August 13, 2009 at 5:11 AM
The forest sounds intriguing. Love the way you expressed the thoughts. Keep writing. Sara
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June 25, 2009 at 2:31 PM
Reminded me of a song..."Movement is acomplished in 6 stages...and the 7th is return.." jojojo your use of language is nice in here, specially in the first line; thanks for the experience!!=D
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June 23, 2009 at 2:51 PM
The way we react to sensations is often determined by the positions we take. You said much with three lines, James. Very nice! Love, Carolyn (Hope you and Noah had a great Father's Day together! I've been fishing.)
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June 21, 2009 at 9:23 PM
positively lead-heavy! James! nice, jim
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June 21, 2009 at 3:15 PM
trickling moving slowly down your back,trickling on the front of your hot flesh--love the introduction and the conclusion,the attract the eye,leaving the body of the poem to be read afterwards, --love this one-- intriguing and passionate write-- James--bravo,you re a great writer,you are ---charma
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