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Heavy Dew

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     Trickling down mine back the heavy dew from the sequoia
for the moment though because I have plans to move far to the left
        so I may feel the trickling on the front of mine hot flesh

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/31/2012 11:38:00 PM

JAMES, stopping by to read a couple of poems. CONGRATULATIONS!! :-) with your featured poem of the week. Goodnight~ LUV~ PD

Daver Austin

Date: 7/31/2012 2:03:00 PM

Sir James, your flesh is eternally hot, even in the veritable rain forest of the sequoia. As usual your write is strictly you and not a thread of anyone else. Needless to say, you are a wonderful one-of-a-kind. Congrats on the selection. daver

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/9/2010 6:51:00 PM

A second entry moves to the next round! Well done, James. Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/13/2009 5:11:00 AM

The forest sounds intriguing. Love the way you expressed the thoughts. Keep writing. Sara

Cesar Cantu

Date: 6/25/2009 2:31:00 PM

Reminded me of a song..."Movement is acomplished in 6 stages...and the 7th is return.." jojojo your use of language is nice in here, specially in the first line; thanks for the experience!!=D

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/23/2009 2:51:00 PM

The way we react to sensations is often determined by the positions we take. You said much with three lines, James. Very nice! Love, Carolyn (Hope you and Noah had a great Father's Day together! I've been fishing.)

James Marshall Goff

Date: 6/21/2009 9:23:00 PM

positively lead-heavy! James! nice, jim

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 6/21/2009 3:15:00 PM

trickling moving slowly down your back,trickling on the front of your hot flesh--love the introduction and the conclusion,the attract the eye,leaving the body of the poem to be read afterwards, --love this one-- intriguing and passionate write-- James--bravo,you re a great writer,you are ---charma