Heavy Bliss

tonight is too dark for a midnight
yet silhouettes of unfinished crescent moon
reminds me of heavy bliss

bluemissingnostalgiapainhaiku

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Skat A

November 29, 2014 at 10:35 PM

Ash,,, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT"

Anne-Lise Andresen

November 29, 2014 at 6:09 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Ash - I choose your first great written haiku poem - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too - Keep the PoetrySoup as a haven - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Ash Aroma

November 29, 2014 at 6:53 AM

hey Anne :) you are the kindest <3 //hugs,Ash