Heavy

Jan 9 2023 poem Heavy My body Is bricks My breath Shallow I sink Deeper Too Heavy For My legs To hold Me Thoughts Like a Weighted blanket Trapped and Tingling Too Heavy Helplessly Sinking -Amanda carden

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Beata Agustin

Date: 1/13/2023 6:13:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." God bless you!

Amanda Carden
Date: 4/11/2023 3:46:00 AM

Thank you!!

Kathy Bahr

Date: 1/11/2023 3:48:00 AM

Wild one. Thank you for sharing.

Amanda Carden
Date: 4/11/2023 3:46:00 AM

Thank you!