Heaven's Rose

My breath it stalls
in a moment of space and time 
held captive grace 
under the starlight twinkle we kiss
igniting the heat 
of a thousand suns 
lovingly touching divine
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Downing  Avatar
May 1, 2017 at 5:33 PM
An enchanting romance, Liam. Absolutely beautiful :) Hugs
Allison Avatar
April 30, 2017 at 9:37 AM
so so beautifully romantic Liam I struggle to write romantic poems I find homour so much simpler:-) have a lovely weekend:-) hugs Jan xx
Trifiatis Avatar
April 18, 2017 at 10:44 AM
What an explosion of poetic grandeur my friend, Liam! Divine! A 7 plus!
Petersen Potter Avatar
April 17, 2017 at 4:09 PM
Hi Liam!:))Wow!Wow!Wow!This is the most very beautiful romantic tender sweet passionate n' captivating love poem you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful,sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I love it!A most very beautiful heartfelt romantic dreamy heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet! Just wonderful!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful romantic gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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