Caren Krutsinger Poet Pantoum

Heaven's Meadow

The leaves laugh in summer’s balm
My hazel eyes naturally begin to close
Spirit world gathers my half-awake attention
Optimism surrounds me in this almost afterlife

My hazel eyes naturally begin to close
Deer, my power animal, greets me shyly
Optimism surrounds me in this almost afterlife
I follow her into heaven’s sweet meadow

Deer, my power animal, greets me shyly
Spirit world gathers my half-awake attention
I follow her into heaven’s sweet meadow
The leaves laugh in summer’s balm

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Susan Jeavons August 17, 2020 at 12:35 PM Great pantoum Caren! You did an excellent job on it. Another fav for me! Susan Maree Caren Krutsinger August 18, 2020 at 3:01 PM Thank you Susan. I love pantoums. They are so much fun to figure out. They keep my mind dancing and hopping.