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Heaven's Meadow

The leaves laugh in summer’s balm My hazel eyes naturally begin to close Spirit world gathers my half-awake attention Optimism surrounds me in this almost afterlife My hazel eyes naturally begin to close Deer, my power animal, greets me shyly Optimism surrounds me in this almost afterlife I follow her into heaven’s sweet meadow Deer, my power animal, greets me shyly Spirit world gathers my half-awake attention I follow her into heaven’s sweet meadow The leaves laugh in summer’s balm

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Date: 8/25/2020 12:24:00 AM
It is apparent that you love pantoums, you wrote this so beautifully. I do believe your mind dances as you write, always something special Caren.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/25/2020 7:43:00 PM
I actually believe pantoums are a wonderful style for me to “change things up” as they come to me so easily. Thank you Sandra.
Date: 8/17/2020 12:35:00 PM
Great pantoum Caren! You did an excellent job on it. Another fav for me! Susan Maree
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/18/2020 3:01:00 PM
Thank you Susan. I love pantoums. They are so much fun to figure out. They keep my mind dancing and hopping.

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