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Heaven's Love

Sitting enjoying the countryside While watching the sun melt away Brilliant colors could never hide Such breathtaking end to my day Pinks, purples, and gold tones too As the clouds blend into this sight Several shades of light to dark blue As it continues to melt into night When the moon glows in dark skies And the stars twinkle way up above Beauty that brings tears to my eyes Too the wonder of heavens own love

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Sandra Adams

Date: 10/2/2019 10:45:00 AM

beautiful penning my friend! :)

Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/2/2019 10:48:00 AM

Thank you so much Sandy!;)

Judy Ball

Date: 10/2/2019 9:48:00 AM

This is excellent Brenda. I love sun rises and sun sets. Here on the prairie they are spectacular and they never fail to fill me with awe. God is so good. God Bless, JB

Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/2/2019 10:41:00 AM

Thank you Judy I bet they are amazing out there! Wow it would be such a sight!;)

Chris Green

Date: 10/2/2019 9:26:00 AM

A beautifully painted poetic picture Brenda. So nicely done.

Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/2/2019 10:41:00 AM

Thanks Chris!;)

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 10/2/2019 8:53:00 AM

I love the picture you paint with your words. This is a lovely poem that should be entered in some contest. It's a gem. Bless you always, Gina

Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/2/2019 9:09:00 AM

Ah Regina thank you but I don't think there is one to enter it in!;)