Heaven's Light

Heaven’s Light


The path I’ve chosen
Sparkles with crystal diamond
Blessings from above



....for Raul's contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Beer Avatar
June 30, 2010 at 7:32 AM
Your path is certainly sparkling on this one, Jimbo. Now I have 2 Jimbo's. Our son Jim's friends call him Jimbo. Thanks for your comment on my poem He's Just An Ol' Cowboy. I wrote it about my husband. It was hard when we had to leave the ranch but he was always there for us. God Bless, Cile
Anderson Avatar
April 12, 2010 at 3:14 PM
Hey James, Thnx for reading and leaving your kind comments on my piece...it means a lot to me...I'm asking Audrey to post this comment on my behalf....later, Jimmy
James Avatar
April 12, 2010 at 1:09 AM
a fine write James. I love Haiku form.
Sweetheart Avatar
April 10, 2010 at 6:36 AM
Brilliant and beautiful entry Jimbo .. good luck in Raul's excellent contest with those gorgeous photos he presents to us to create brilliance ..and uhave ... good luck and thankxxx for the many compliments on my poetry to start my Saturday .. so cold in NJ today... down to 40 from 90 for 3 days in a row... spoiled ..now freezing.. luv.. "Sweetheart"
Kendrick Avatar
April 10, 2010 at 6:00 AM
Great write that should be in the winner's circle...Good luck..Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
Mehta Avatar
April 9, 2010 at 9:53 PM
I enjoyed the haiku. A fine write
Devonshire Avatar
April 9, 2010 at 9:01 PM
You are a ray of sunshine, Jim. Thank you for the kindness you have always shown to me and others.
Gorelick Avatar
April 9, 2010 at 7:44 PM
Nice one.Yes, it looks like an opening into heaven..BG
Culverhouse Avatar
April 9, 2010 at 7:04 PM
check out my poem, flight's comments.
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