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Heavens Honeydew

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Verse 1 Heaven drips its honeydew, Pouring love where it’s overdue… Your fetching face is in its view, For heaven drips its honeydew… V2 Sunshine breaks serenading thru, My country lips, I’ve had a few… Never seen the likes, of forever you, For heaven drips its honeydew… V3 With a scorpions sting, I’m turning blue, Decaying in a desert I never knew… Until I saw your smile right on cue, For heaven drips its honeydew… Chorus …for heaven drips its honeydew …catching your love with just one shoe …resting my wounds near the bayou …for heaven drips its honeydew Bridge Never say goodbye never say adieu, Loving in your arms will ensue… Trying to get away from that old mildew, For heaven drips its honeydew… Repeat Verses then Chorus & Fade... Background music... Jefferson Airplane - "Embryonic Journey" With Virtual Male Voice July.03.2019 Love Poems for Her (That Special Romantic Interest) Team Poetrysoup Placed 2'nd...Thank You

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Tania Kitchin

Date: 8/3/2019 5:01:00 AM

Awesome WW, congratulations on your winning placement, enjoyed!

Line Gauthier

Date: 8/2/2019 5:50:00 PM

Beautiful, WW. Congrats on your podium finish.

Sandra Adams

Date: 8/2/2019 9:23:00 AM

This is a gorgeous lyrical poem....congrats on your second place win....well penned and very worthy of your placing! hugs :)

Susan Ashley

Date: 7/30/2019 9:43:00 AM

Ah, bro bro, your dreamy romantic piece sings a sunlit serenade of heart melting beauty. A swoon-worthy and luscious lyric! Warmest wishes and honeydews.. ~illum

Brenda Chiri

Date: 7/9/2019 2:42:00 PM

Wow bro bro I simply love this! You always did have s way with words this is just beautiful and a fav!;)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/7/2019 4:40:00 PM

I read this one without the music, W.W., and I find that it makes its own music. Terrific lyric!! A FAVE for me. Melodic music forever! :) gw

Lady Labyrinth

Date: 7/7/2019 5:16:00 AM

Phew! this is dripping with honey. I love anything to do with Bees, Honey, music. What a shame I can't hear the music, for some reason, not working this side. Will have to check the link to listen to the background music.Fab lyrics Light Warrior.

Lady Labyrinth
Date: 7/7/2019 5:31:00 AM

mildew. not good. blast it.

Lady Labyrinth
Date: 7/7/2019 5:30:00 AM

https://youtu.be/753_mUwbOJ4

Lady Labyrinth
Date: 7/7/2019 5:24:00 AM

Researching "Honey" songs...lol. Great poem. Love it.

Lady Labyrinth
Date: 7/7/2019 5:23:00 AM

https://youtu.be/w3KOowB4k_k

J.W. Earnings

Date: 7/7/2019 2:02:00 AM

Gracious and beautiful lyric! -JWE

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 7/5/2019 1:22:00 PM

This is captivating - and who can resist honeydew? Good luck in the contest!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/5/2019 10:46:00 AM

She sounds decadent. I enjoyed this romantic sensual write. Good luck in the contest.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 7/4/2019 11:31:00 PM

Lips that drip honey, and a smile that holds you on cue. Oh my!! She sounds so dreamy and romantic. Soft and sensual. :) Right in plain view. Your thoughts are beautiful my Warrior with Wings. Keep Smiling and reaching for the Stars. For lips of honeydew. :) Brandy

Arturo Michael

Date: 7/4/2019 8:44:00 AM

And my tongue is out to catch some of that honey...Lovely music and words...