Heavens Gate

I can't wait,
to see Heavens gate.
I know he's my father,
he's always bothered.
Why do people complain?
People live,
people die.
You either go to Heaven and live,
or to Hell and fry.
The light is better,
darkness leads to pain.
In the dark people have nothing to gain.
It's Gods call,
if we rise or if we fall.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
May 31, 2011 at 5:19 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Danielle. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
Hall Avatar
June 5, 2011 at 2:26 PM
thank you. I will read others poetry as well like you suggested.
Sweetheart Avatar
May 28, 2011 at 9:21 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoy the site as u share your creative poetry luv..
Mehta Avatar
May 28, 2011 at 1:09 PM
Lovely devotional expressions on faith, Danielle
La France Avatar
May 28, 2011 at 7:41 AM
I feel exactly the same way, wonderful poem and welcome to poetry soup~~
Anbuchelvan Avatar
May 28, 2011 at 1:28 AM
NICE
Chappell Avatar
May 28, 2011 at 1:28 AM
powerful write
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