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Heaven's Gain

I would deny the birds to sing, The blooming flowers, the coming spring. If it be true that he is gone Then tell me pray, why they live on. Cruel February stole his breath. The one we loved lies low in death This man who loved his family And to all men a friend would be. Dear gracious Lord, I thank thee for Those happy years that were before The angels came to take my love And carry him to Heaven above. This world is such a loney place And I've tomorrows yet to face. Forgive me that his loss I moan. Remind me he was ours on loan. For Dr. Mehta's Elegy contest.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/15/2010 10:42:00 AM
My congratulations to you Joyce on your win in Dr. Ram Mehta's contest "Elegy". Love, Carol
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Date: 8/15/2010 8:12:00 AM
Congratulations Joyce on your most worthy win with this beauty. Agape, Moses
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Date: 8/14/2010 1:12:00 PM
Congrats Joyce on your winning poem in Dr. Ram's contest with this beautiful write and another superb win for u to enjoy this weekend.. I am airborne .. sooooo long now ... for 19 hours total.. will arrive tonight at 9 p.m. USA time EST .. Italy is a whole day ahead ..it will be Sunday there..luv..
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Date: 8/14/2010 10:13:00 AM
We really are only on loan. Sad but beautifully written poem.
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Date: 8/14/2010 7:01:00 AM
A very touching poem. Loved the end. Many congrats on the win.
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Date: 8/14/2010 6:46:00 AM
Congrats for the ninth placement in my contest, Joyce
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Date: 8/13/2010 4:36:00 PM
thank you for your comment.Sorry to say that all my poems come from the feelings that I have.
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Date: 8/12/2010 7:23:00 AM
sorry for your loss, such sadness yet resolve in this poem. I pray to be able to rejoice in the life of my deceased loved ones and not be depressed for their loss..it is hard on certain days though..
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Date: 8/11/2010 12:58:00 PM
Exquisite piece Joyce.. good luck in Dr. Ram's contest... your rhyme is very well done.. and the theme.. is beautiful as we share this together..luv.. good luck..with luv..
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Date: 8/11/2010 12:35:00 PM
Excellent work that has rhyme, rhythm, and flow..Enjoyed reading your work...Good luck in the contest with this sure winner...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my blog..I am appreciating of all prayers that are going up to God for we need it in this time...I took my first steroid this morning and I feel like that and the prayers are going to give me some relief today..I am feeling the inflammation leave now..Sara
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Date: 8/11/2010 10:09:00 AM
What wonderful poetry I am reading today and so diverse. I have not read a bad poem yet today. I am enjoying reading each and everyone from old poets and new poets alike. Lots of amazing contest entries also. Thank you for sharing yours with us today Joyce. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/11/2010 9:22:00 AM
Sooo moving and beautifully written from your loving heart. Joyce, you are an incredible writer, one of my favorites on the Soup. Wishing you success with this heartfelt masterpiece. Love, Carolyn
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