Heavens Fantasyland

They ride bareback on Unicorns, until Pegasus Flies by
They mount the silk white steed, and go soaring in the sky
They touch a Double Rainbow, each finger a different hue
They Draw a Home, a MOM, a Dad; as 4 year olds will do
They catch a little Leprechan, and Win his pot of Gold
They play Ring Around the Rosy, with King Arthur, Brave and Bold
They oft go to the Pearly Gates : Mom's Heart and Hands to Hold

Inspired by Juanita Garcia; who lost her twin Boys in a tragic House Fire

Dedicated to Juan and Jose Garcia : 4/29/2006 - 11/22/2010 "Rest in Peace"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 11/25/2010 5:39:00 PM
Very movinf dedication you have penned to Juan and Jose garcia, HG
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Date: 11/25/2010 8:38:00 AM
Such a sad event to inspire the beauty of your poem HG my silent beau.. tenderly written ..there is hope in each line.. wonderful my friend.. enjoyed your inspirations...today on this H.T.Day extended to u and yours from Ron and I ..with luv forever and always..your "Sweetheart"...
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Date: 11/25/2010 7:15:00 AM
Such a sweet poem HG..I cant imagine how terrible that must of been. See your mail..BG
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Date: 11/25/2010 6:39:00 AM
HG, this is a most wonderful and beautiful dedication to this family. My heartfelt condolences to them in this their time of sorrow. Blessings and love, Joy (Jew)
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