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Heavens Breaking Us Down

Imagine a dream to real to see. A mind cast victim to the world that be. Memories breaking, from the sky they leap. Content with blindness through the world they seek. Oh heavenly thought, you break us down, giving us space of which we willfully drowned. A fate of fact, a fact of fate, a fate that fades, until all we have is the heavens that remain.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/7/2016 1:43:00 PM
WELL DONE
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Date: 1/14/2012 2:12:00 PM
This was a pleasant poem Kevin.oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 5/29/2011 5:22:00 AM
Hi Kevin, great poem, last stanza is my favourite. Anne
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Date: 4/25/2011 3:39:00 PM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Kevin. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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