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Heaven's Ball

HEAVEN BALL

willow fluffs
afloat---
feather cotton rain
shower
heaven white ball

(c)Olive Eloisa
2:30 am
August 02,
2014

colormagicnatureseasonsspringhaiku

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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

December 8, 2014 at 10:22 AM

I wish heaven should look a fluffy soufflé.Love Olive XXXX RAJAT

Liam Mcdaid

October 6, 2014 at 7:36 AM

what an amazing picture you paint olive excellent pen

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

October 6, 2014 at 9:26 AM

thanks Liam.. :)

Casarah Nance

August 9, 2014 at 3:25 PM

Naturally beautiful! Well done !

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

August 22, 2014 at 4:59 AM

Thanks Cassie..:)

Pandita Sietesantos

August 9, 2014 at 10:10 AM

Congratulations on your wonderful win, Olive. I enjoyed reading this beautiful haiku. Excellent write with clever "AHA"! Pandita

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

August 22, 2014 at 4:58 AM

Thanks much Pandita..:) I appreciate your drop by..:)

James Fraser

August 8, 2014 at 4:03 PM

Breathtaking short piece Olive, and you write so beautifully, James...... :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

August 22, 2014 at 4:59 AM

As you are too James ..:) you write beautifully..:)

Nette Onclaud

August 8, 2014 at 2:19 PM

stunning 'ku, eloi...enjoyed the description of clouds.. huge congrats!.. huggs

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

August 10, 2014 at 1:52 PM

Thanks much Nette..:) GBU q

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 8, 2014 at 11:39 AM

- Congratulations on your Haiku "Aha" Moment - // Anne-Lise :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

August 9, 2014 at 11:55 PM

Thanks much Anne Lise..:) GBU hugs

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

August 8, 2014 at 6:37 AM

Congrats on winning lovely haiku dear Olive!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

August 8, 2014 at 7:19 PM

Thanks much Dr. Upma..:) GBU

Dr.Ram Mehta

August 8, 2014 at 1:02 AM

Nice inspirational write, Olive. congrats

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

August 8, 2014 at 7:56 AM

Thank you Dr. ram..:) I appreciate it..:$

Andrea Dietrich

August 7, 2014 at 11:57 PM

very pretty, Olive. Congrats for your win.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

August 8, 2014 at 7:55 AM

Thanks Andie..:) kudos too:)

Paul Callus

August 5, 2014 at 3:40 PM

Well done, Olive_eloi! We have both been inspired by clouds in our haiku. Hope you are settling down and feeling excited for good reasons:) // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

August 7, 2014 at 2:03 PM

yes for good reasons definitely.. :) wee sorry for being out for sometime here in soup.. :) Hope i can still cope up to my absence. :)weee thanks Paul..

Charmaine Chircop

August 2, 2014 at 5:50 PM

Excellent haiku !!Charma

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

August 5, 2014 at 4:23 PM

Thanks Charmaine..:) GBU

Jslambert Mister Roboto

August 2, 2014 at 5:43 PM

HI-,the deliver of KOO is delightful as the white full feather cotton rain at the white ball, Don't think I have read your stuff before, Could be wrong, SO FAR SO GOOD!~

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

August 4, 2014 at 7:39 AM

Thank you so much for your drop by..:)