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Heaven's Ball

HEAVEN BALL

willow fluffs
afloat---
feather cotton rain
shower
heaven white ball

(c)Olive Eloisa
2:30 am
August 02,
2014

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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 12/8/2014 10:22:00 AM

I wish heaven should look a fluffy soufflé.Love Olive XXXX RAJAT

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 10/6/2014 7:36:00 AM

what an amazing picture you paint olive excellent pen

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/6/2014 9:26:00 AM

thanks Liam.. :)

Casarah Nance

Date: 8/9/2014 3:25:00 PM

Naturally beautiful! Well done !

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 8/22/2014 4:59:00 AM

Thanks Cassie..:)

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 8/9/2014 10:10:00 AM

Congratulations on your wonderful win, Olive. I enjoyed reading this beautiful haiku. Excellent write with clever "AHA"! Pandita

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 8/22/2014 4:58:00 AM

Thanks much Pandita..:) I appreciate your drop by..:)

James Fraser

Date: 8/8/2014 4:03:00 PM

Breathtaking short piece Olive, and you write so beautifully, James...... :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 8/22/2014 4:59:00 AM

As you are too James ..:) you write beautifully..:)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/8/2014 2:19:00 PM

stunning 'ku, eloi...enjoyed the description of clouds.. huge congrats!.. huggs

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 8/10/2014 1:52:00 PM

Thanks much Nette..:) GBU q

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/8/2014 11:39:00 AM

- Congratulations on your Haiku "Aha" Moment - // Anne-Lise :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 8/9/2014 11:55:00 PM

Thanks much Anne Lise..:) GBU hugs

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 8/8/2014 6:37:00 AM

Congrats on winning lovely haiku dear Olive!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 8/8/2014 7:19:00 PM

Thanks much Dr. Upma..:) GBU

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/8/2014 1:02:00 AM

Nice inspirational write, Olive. congrats

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 8/8/2014 7:56:00 AM

Thank you Dr. ram..:) I appreciate it..:$

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/7/2014 11:57:00 PM

very pretty, Olive. Congrats for your win.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 8/8/2014 7:55:00 AM

Thanks Andie..:) kudos too:)

Paul Callus

Date: 8/5/2014 3:40:00 PM

Well done, Olive_eloi! We have both been inspired by clouds in our haiku. Hope you are settling down and feeling excited for good reasons:) // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 8/7/2014 2:03:00 PM

yes for good reasons definitely.. :) wee sorry for being out for sometime here in soup.. :) Hope i can still cope up to my absence. :)weee thanks Paul..

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 8/2/2014 5:50:00 PM

Excellent haiku !!Charma

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 8/5/2014 4:23:00 PM

Thanks Charmaine..:) GBU

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 8/2/2014 5:43:00 PM

HI-,the deliver of KOO is delightful as the white full feather cotton rain at the white ball, Don't think I have read your stuff before, Could be wrong, SO FAR SO GOOD!~

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 8/4/2014 7:39:00 AM

Thank you so much for your drop by..:)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/2/2014 6:21:00 AM

- Great haiku, Olive ! - Happy weekend !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 8/4/2014 7:38:00 AM

thanks much Anne Lise my sweet..:) hugs