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Heavens Above

worship in the shade

a cathedral ever glade-

reaching for the sky



Ekphrasis on Raul's photo

natureplaceshaiku

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Ismael Nieves

October 14, 2009 at 8:39 AM

Beautiful poem; and CONGRATS! on your honorable mention in Raul's contest. Put it in my Fav.

Robin L. Gass

October 10, 2009 at 7:06 AM

Congratulations on your WIN with this beautiful Haiku, Brian! Creates such a lovely image! Love, Robin

Brandee Augustus

October 4, 2009 at 5:42 PM

Again, I love how you brought this picture of nature around to looking at our Heavenly Father! It makes you see nature in a different way. It should make people want to worship the Creator more than the creation. We're just to appreciate and respect His creations. Congratulations with this winner!

Andrew Crisci

October 4, 2009 at 9:51 AM

Hi, Sir Brian Strand. Congratulations on your winning poem, "Heavens above". Your Haiku express a very powerful sentiment about one's spirutuality...by just gazing at the Heavens above! A powerful statement, which makes an unbeliever... believe! Enjoy your reward with many more to come. God bless for your comments on my poetry. Keep up the wornderful work. Warm Regards, Andrew.

Carol Sunshine Brown

October 1, 2009 at 4:32 AM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest Brian. Love, Carol

Raul Moreno

October 1, 2009 at 12:06 AM

Brian, congrats on your success in my contest...Raul

Carolyn Devonshire

September 3, 2009 at 4:50 PM

This reminds me of Emily dickinson's poem in which she describes feeling closer to God in her garden than she did in a church. Beautiful poem, Brian! Love, Carolyn

John Freeman

September 2, 2009 at 6:10 PM

Nicely written Brian, Sincerely Moses

Sara Kendrick

September 2, 2009 at 4:37 PM

Nicely descriptive. Sara

Carrie Richards

September 2, 2009 at 12:34 PM

This is a perfect description of that lovely photo!! Wonderful and inspiring, Brian!! ~ Carrie

Carol Sunshine Brown

September 2, 2009 at 12:19 PM

I have enjoyed reading your splendid poetry today Brian.Thank you for sharing it here at PoetrySoup, where you have become an asset to the site and to us other poets as well. Love, Carol