Heavenly Wings

With difficult times in life
when dealing with present moments
your thoughts in a turmoil
within the heart falls apart
days where tear drops fall
no holding them back
days where you want to stay in bed
forget the world that surrounds
but in the morrow you arise
facing another new day
but in all your sorrow
your faith was not shaken
for you were never alone
even on the day he called 
your loved one home
she now floats on clouds of silk
earning her heavenly wings.

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Date: 5/6/2024 8:17:00 AM
Hi Phyllis, I am so so sorry for your loss, losing a loved one is so hard to go through - you now have a guardian angel by your side.. Your poem is beautiful, and my thoughts are with you dear Phyllis . Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 5/6/2024 9:19:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words and yes I have a guardian angel now. Always hard to lose a mom and miss her a lot. Have a lovely day. love phyl
Date: 4/14/2024 8:33:00 AM
WOW!!! What a wonderful/beautiful write. So Sorry.... I wish you would write more. Have a blessed day writing away.......................
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Date: 5/6/2024 9:21:00 AM
Thanks Paula and yes I wish to write more but guess it has been a down winter for me so need to bounce back. Have a great week. love phyl
Date: 2/10/2024 11:04:00 AM
So touching and beautiful.. so sorry for your loss..
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 3/5/2024 10:39:00 AM
Thank you for comment. I have good days and tearful days but will get thru it. love phyl
Date: 1/31/2024 12:38:00 PM
Beautiful Phyllis….very sad and moving! Debx
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 3/5/2024 10:38:00 AM
Thanks Deb it has been a difficult time as I talked to her every day. Missing her alot. love phyl
Date: 1/31/2024 11:36:00 AM
- I understand how you feel, dear friend...she had a long life on earth...her angel wings were ready...but, the longing will always be there ... a lovely poem :) - hugs
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Date: 2/7/2024 2:52:00 PM
Thanks my friend for your comment and yes days where you know she had a good long life but sure miss our daily talks. love phyl
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