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Heavenly Tear

Tears fall from my eyes, As your tiny hands fall from mine. A few days is all we had with you, It seemed a full life time. I dreamed how we’d played, In the sun-snow and rain. How you would grow into a man, Making me proud everyday. The dull sound of the alarm, As doctors come rushing in. Angels flying above you, Heavenly children sing. I see you leave your body, And glance down at me. There’s a sudden realisation, No pain-your totally free. Now my son in heaven, Safe as safe can be. Heavenly tears are falling, From him-two-you-to me .

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 11/30/2008 5:22:00 PM
THE PAIN IS LIKE NONE OTHER AND I PRAY ONLY I FEEL IT WOULDNT WISH ON ANYONE GLAD TO BE BK ..................
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Date: 11/30/2008 4:27:00 PM
So sad, yet so beautifully expressed! If this is an actual occurrence I am truly sorry... God bless, Keith
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Date: 11/9/2008 4:48:00 PM
Beautiful poem in tribute to the one you lost. Accept my sympathy. The emotion comes through your words. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 11/9/2008 4:22:00 PM
last line ment ........ from shane-mum-me like 3way tear but glad you liked it .......peter
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Date: 11/4/2008 12:21:00 PM
Good reflection of life and death...nicely written, the form is quatrain; the last line is a little confusing other than that, job well done!
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