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Heavenly Striptease

as I stand here and gaze into the heavens this dark, inky sky ahhh . . . now I see you my love my bright, shining Gibbous Moon the dark cloud moved on into the night showing the heavens my spirituality for we are as one whether you are a mere Crescent Moon timidly showing mere tantalizing part of you we may only guess what is hidden in the darkness which is you its as if you are having wicked fun at my expense time gives me the taste of your delicious and tempting Half Moon glow of iridescence revealing more of yourself although it seems the more you show the more is hidden you are playing me an exotic dance befitting your lofty aspirations an enticing, though half naked smile I stand there wishing the nights would flow faster as each night slowly evolves into the next one you know I will be there again and again waiting patiently waiting for your final unveiling and shows me your patient lover you in all your majestic glory a huge, bright and lustrous Full Moon rising I almost sob

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 4/5/2015 10:40:00 PM
JERRY, Thank you for the sweet reply to my comment. Have yourself a Happy Easter Love LINDA
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Date: 3/24/2015 12:30:00 PM
I'm reading your posts, from the latest going to your earliest writes. Had to stop here and leave a comment. I feel as if I'm almost there myself! Emotive, descriptive, truly a gem of a write. May I borrow your pen? :D
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Date: 1/28/2015 4:55:00 PM
I see this is your BEST poem at Soup. It is wonderful!
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Date: 10/10/2014 11:38:00 PM
What an original metaphor you use in this work! Good job! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Date: 10/8/2014 11:28:00 AM
This is very unique, a 7 and I am going to fav this one.
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Date: 10/7/2014 5:55:00 PM
"time gives me the taste of your delicious and tempting Half Moon glow of iridescence revealing more of yourself" "my bright, shining Gibbous Moon the dark cloud" PURE GOLD, the entire work is a dazzling conception. Rated a Super 7!!
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Jerry Bolton
Date: 10/7/2014 6:34:00 PM
I'll have to admit, Robert, this particular, as I was writing I felt very good about myself and the poem as a whole. Thanks you big time for the Super 7!
Date: 10/7/2014 5:31:00 PM
She's giving you full exposure tonight....cheers
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Jerry Bolton
Date: 10/7/2014 6:32:00 PM
Many thanks, Tim, I appreciate you being here and commenting.
Date: 10/7/2014 5:14:00 PM
Hi Jerry, my favorite line, my bright, shining Gibbous Moon.... Amazingly beautiful, a tease of love... LINDA
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Jerry Bolton
Date: 10/8/2014 5:19:00 AM
Thank you very much, Linda, for stopping by and commenting on my poetry, I truly appreciate it.

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