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Heavenly Slumber

O death don't be so proud you're not as powerful nor dreadful a being that one may think Dying you take me to the grave in sweet surrender that comes with rest and sleep through this passage of life Which brings pleasure mixed with euphoric sighs in the last breath Moving so swiftly into a peaceful slumber beautiful tranquil music surrounds outside the body neon ultra violet beams of celestial brilliance In experiencing the supernatural glory overwhelming joy brighter than light beyond beauty without comparison It's there a soul finds reason why a good life is cut short giving rest to the conscience in eternal bliss Setting the spirit free Almighty Master O God in deaths prayer You hold everlasting power over all Written by Maria Mc Laughlin and Waseem Jani Jobz

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/18/2016 12:53:00 PM
NICE TO SEE THIS ONE AGAIN
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Date: 12/6/2015 12:55:00 PM
;) MARIA, Enjoyed reading your poem today. LUV **SKAT**
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Date: 7/21/2015 5:53:00 AM
maria very beautifully painted piece you both drew an excellent pen together wishing you both a blessed week filled with smiles
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Date: 7/19/2015 9:13:00 PM
MARIA, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 7/19/2015 2:02:00 PM
Maria,, a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT""
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Date: 7/18/2015 11:35:00 AM
Thank you lyric man for reading my writing and taking the time to comment on it.very much appreciated.
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Date: 7/18/2015 5:46:00 AM
- With smiles and joy I welcome you to P-Soup, Maria :) - Hope you will find this poem page interesting and post many more poems in the future - Have a great experience together here with us in "the poems world" - I wish you every success - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/17/2015 2:12:00 AM
Thank you Durian Petersen I hope you have a blessed day to God bless you.
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Date: 7/17/2015 12:00:00 AM
Excellent pens Maria n' Waseem! Hi Maria!I want to give you a very warm welcome to Poetry Soup.So nice to have you as a new member here and posting again with us.Very sad poem but so beautifully written my dear friend Maria.Very powerful piece!I enjoyed it.A 7! And a fav.Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light!God bless you!Hugs!:) D.
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