Eileen Manassian Poet Rhyme

Heavenly Odyssey

Light and airy,
sparkling, bright!
That's the theme
to bring delight!

Sweet and tasty,
luscious too!
Choicest words
that ought to do!

Blithesome, rosy
full of glee
Loveliest 
of poetry!

Sun kissed, moon blessed
Heavenly
Every line
an odyssey 

Love and romance
Chivalry 
Rhythms about 
Love's destiny

Playful, dreamy
Whimsy lore
Heart's own quest:
Devote, adore!

Poets, readers
Loved ones, all
Listen to
the muse's call

Follow swiftly,
travel far
Lose yourself
Twirl on a star

Pretty, fancy
Dulcet chimes
You will find
in minstrel's rhymes. 

Eileen Manassian
February 21, 2025

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John Loving Iii May 16, 2025 at 11:07 AM I always go to her first. She doesn't disappoint.

Richard Lamoureux March 10, 2025 at 7:35 AM It’s lovely, you rose to the challenge. It has an undertow of sarcasm. Eileen Manassian April 4, 2025 at 7:21 AM Thank you! So good to read your comments. Trying to be chirpy might bring some hidden sarcasm with it. ;)

John Loving Iii March 7, 2025 at 10:34 AM When it comes to poetry you get a A+. It's wonderful to read the art of a real poet. Eileen Manassian April 4, 2025 at 7:21 AM Thank you for your kind comment. Much appreciated

Gordon Mcconnell March 1, 2025 at 4:26 AM Such an inspiring and uplifting piece of writing Eileen, nice rhyme and flow too. Have a great weekend, Gordon Eileen Manassian April 4, 2025 at 7:27 AM Thank you, Gordon. Hope all is well with you. I appreciate your visit to my page

Victor Buhagiar February 25, 2025 at 1:30 AM What a joyful poem you wrote, Eileen. Wonderful.

Andrea Dietrich February 22, 2025 at 3:24 PM Lovely rhymes from a lovely poetess

Regina Mcintosh February 22, 2025 at 4:40 AM Oh, I just love this. So sweet and adorable. Just absolutely love it. God bless you, friend. Love, Gina

Ilene Bauer February 21, 2025 at 9:53 AM wow! i haven't been in such a light and joyful frame of mind in such a long time, eileen, that it was a real pleasure to read such a poem today! thank you... Eileen Manassian February 22, 2025 at 12:53 AM Glad I could make you smile. To be honest, I wrote this as a challenge to myself. I've been writing dark and depressing writes that match my life at the moment, so...I don't want to lose friends and followers here, so I tried my best to write a cheery write.

Paige Hind February 21, 2025 at 9:42 AM Beautiful, Eileene!!! " Sun kissed, moon blessed Heavenly..." - "Lose yourself Twirl on a star" what a lovely way to look at writing poetry...<3 Eileen Manassian February 22, 2025 at 12:54 AM Thanks, dear. Glad you liked it. Poetry is one of the things that keeps me sane. Big hugs

Daniel Henry Rodgers February 21, 2025 at 7:47 AM Dear Eileen, your words dance aslight as air, sweet as melody, a gentle waltz of love and wonder. As I read I thought how each line feels like a twirl under stardust. Pure joy in poetic form. Beautiful. Winter Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel Eileen Manassian February 22, 2025 at 12:55 AM Your comment is poetry in itself, Daniel. Thank you for your kindness. Your words are a blessing to me.

Arthur Vaso February 21, 2025 at 2:56 AM So beautiful your heart is far softer than mine these days! :) Eileen Manassian February 22, 2025 at 12:56 AM Oh...you'd be surprised. I'm in the depth of despair, but...just goes to show how you can project what you want. I'm trying to focus on light and airy poems, the last couple have been...well, dark.

Anne-Lise Andresen February 21, 2025 at 2:15 AM - Oh... it started so beautifully, Eileen... the end was dark... I'm sending you bright thoughts :) - hugs Anne-Lise Andresen February 21, 2025 at 4:32 AM :) <3 Eileen Manassian February 21, 2025 at 2:27 AM Changed that stanza. Thanks for the input. :) Eileen Manassian February 21, 2025 at 2:18 AM Hi, dear. I'm sorry you thought it ended darkly. I tried my best to write a happy rhyme so I won't lose followers here. Shall I remove the stanza before the last?