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Heavenly Odyssey

Light and airy, sparkling, bright! That's the theme to bring delight! Sweet and tasty, luscious too! Choicest words that ought to do! Blithesome, rosy full of glee Loveliest of poetry! Sun kissed, moon blessed Heavenly Every line an odyssey Love and romance Chivalry Rhythms about Love's destiny Playful, dreamy Whimsy lore Heart's own quest: Devote, adore! Poets, readers Loved ones, all Listen to the muse's call Follow swiftly, travel far Lose yourself Twirl on a star Pretty, fancy Dulcet chimes You will find in minstrel's rhymes. Eileen Manassian February 21, 2025

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Date: 5/16/2025 11:07:00 AM
I always go to her first. She doesn't disappoint.
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Date: 3/10/2025 7:35:00 AM
It’s lovely, you rose to the challenge. It has an undertow of sarcasm.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/4/2025 7:21:00 AM
Thank you! So good to read your comments. Trying to be chirpy might bring some hidden sarcasm with it. ;)
Date: 3/7/2025 10:34:00 AM
When it comes to poetry you get a A+. It's wonderful to read the art of a real poet.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/4/2025 7:21:00 AM
Thank you for your kind comment. Much appreciated
Date: 3/1/2025 4:26:00 AM
Such an inspiring and uplifting piece of writing Eileen, nice rhyme and flow too. Have a great weekend, Gordon
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/4/2025 7:27:00 AM
Thank you, Gordon. Hope all is well with you. I appreciate your visit to my page
Date: 2/25/2025 1:30:00 AM
What a joyful poem you wrote, Eileen. Wonderful.
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Date: 2/24/2025 1:40:00 PM
Out of your funk? Great rhymes Eileen
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Date: 2/22/2025 3:24:00 PM
Lovely rhymes from a lovely poetess
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Date: 2/22/2025 4:40:00 AM
Oh, I just love this. So sweet and adorable. Just absolutely love it. God bless you, friend. Love, Gina
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Date: 2/21/2025 9:53:00 AM
wow! i haven't been in such a light and joyful frame of mind in such a long time, eileen, that it was a real pleasure to read such a poem today! thank you...
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/22/2025 12:53:00 AM
Glad I could make you smile. To be honest, I wrote this as a challenge to myself. I've been writing dark and depressing writes that match my life at the moment, so...I don't want to lose friends and followers here, so I tried my best to write a cheery write.
Date: 2/21/2025 9:42:00 AM
Beautiful, Eileene!!! " Sun kissed, moon blessed Heavenly..." - "Lose yourself Twirl on a star" what a lovely way to look at writing poetry...<3
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/22/2025 12:54:00 AM
Thanks, dear. Glad you liked it. Poetry is one of the things that keeps me sane. Big hugs
Date: 2/21/2025 7:47:00 AM
Dear Eileen, your words dance aslight as air, sweet as melody, a gentle waltz of love and wonder. As I read I thought how each line feels like a twirl under stardust. Pure joy in poetic form. Beautiful. Winter Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/22/2025 12:55:00 AM
Your comment is poetry in itself, Daniel. Thank you for your kindness. Your words are a blessing to me.
Date: 2/21/2025 2:56:00 AM
So beautiful your heart is far softer than mine these days! :)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/22/2025 12:56:00 AM
Oh...you'd be surprised. I'm in the depth of despair, but...just goes to show how you can project what you want. I'm trying to focus on light and airy poems, the last couple have been...well, dark.
Date: 2/21/2025 2:15:00 AM
- Oh... it started so beautifully, Eileen... the end was dark... I'm sending you bright thoughts :) - hugs
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/21/2025 4:32:00 AM
:) <3
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/21/2025 2:27:00 AM
Changed that stanza. Thanks for the input. :)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/21/2025 2:18:00 AM
Hi, dear. I'm sorry you thought it ended darkly. I tried my best to write a happy rhyme so I won't lose followers here. Shall I remove the stanza before the last?

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