Heavenly Nature

I threw myself into the air,
like a rock-star diving into the arms
of his die-hard fans,
only for soft, green, succulent stems
to lower my gravity onto the grass surface.

When the wind blew around me,
sweet, scented petals scattered in the air
above me; a feeling of divine grandeur
overwhelmed me, as I couldn't breathe- I didn't
want any sigh, blink, or breathing,
to steal this moment away from me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Gibson Avatar
November 24, 2014 at 2:48 PM
Lovely float back to earth, Teddy; beautiful!
Kimathi Avatar
November 25, 2014 at 1:58 AM
Thanks Faye! ^_^
Andresen Avatar
November 24, 2014 at 6:08 AM
- A beautiful moment in Mother Nature, Teddy - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Kimathi Avatar
November 24, 2014 at 7:18 AM
Thank you Anne Lise! Have a pleasant week! ^_^
Petersen Potter Avatar
November 24, 2014 at 3:54 AM
Very nice write! Enjoyed it! :) Love and hugs! xxxx D.
Kimathi Avatar
November 24, 2014 at 5:48 AM
Thank you Dorian! ^_^
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