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Heavenly Flushes

Heavenly Flushes
It makes one wonder if the angels blush
When heavenly loos need a stately flush
When it pees with rain do they feel exposed
Are toilets in heaven made from fine gold.

There’s another thing that I’d wish to know
To where o where do heaven’s flushes flow
Is pee angel rain, is earth heaven’s drain
Is that what helps grow a floral domain.

I got an answer that came in a dream
Heaven has a purifying machine
Angels pee is scent with magic content
Made from the master’s creative intent.

So do not be afraid to drink water
Every sister, brother, son or daughter 
Streams, rivers and sea are pure as can be
Thank the angels for their gift of sweet pee.
7th October 2021

The Throne in Heaven Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Jack Webster

Copyright © Beryl Edmonds | Year Posted 2021

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Jennifer Proxenos Date: 10/14/2021 11:00:00 PM This is such fun and so creatively written and indeed very different and insightful - these questions do rise in our minds, and we must understand and interpret it as we think it is. Love this poem Belle. Kind regards, Jenny. Login to Reply Beryl Edmonds Date: 10/15/2021 2:08:00 PM Thank you Jenny, the poem was fun to write for the contest, if snowflakes are angel kisses, then maybe it’s true rain is their sweet wishes… Belle

Lindsay Laurie Date: 10/11/2021 7:43:00 PM Hello Belle ... you've put me off drinking water Belle. The only sweet pea I prefer is the one that grows in the garden - thank you Belle - Lindsay Login to Reply Beryl Edmonds Date: 10/15/2021 2:05:00 PM Hi Lindsay… Always drink water without it we’d die, ha - thanks a lot and keep drinking sweet pee… Belle

Silpika Kalita Date: 10/11/2021 3:41:00 AM Absolutely in love with the flow and the rhythm! Brilliant juxtaposition of earthly and heavenly imageries! Best wishes for the contest! Login to Reply Beryl Edmonds Date: 10/11/2021 6:56:00 AM Thank you so much Silpika, love that word “juxtaposition” haven’t seen or heard of it before… Belle

Alexis Y. Date: 10/8/2021 4:54:00 AM WoW! Belle, I enjoyed your take on the contest theme. Good solution/answer to, if it was a throne room in heaven. Congratulations in advance. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis Login to Reply Beryl Edmonds Date: 10/8/2021 7:26:00 AM Thank you very much Alexis, you have a wonderful day too… Belle :-)

Victor Buhagiar Date: 10/8/2021 1:21:00 AM A fun write. Wishing you good luck for the contest. Login to Reply Beryl Edmonds Date: 10/8/2021 2:13:00 AM Thank you so very much indeed Victor… Belle

Sotto Poet Date: 10/7/2021 2:55:00 PM Nice take for the contest and fun write not to forget, especially when it rains..good luck, Belle. Login to Reply Beryl Edmonds Date: 10/7/2021 3:19:00 PM The contest is fun and it was fun to write the poem. Rain will never be the same for me, I’ll always think of it as angels pee. Thank you for the comments and goods wishes Lasaad… Belle

L Milton Hankins Date: 10/7/2021 2:30:00 PM This was obviously a fun write, Belle, and I enjoyed reading it. To think of rain as "angels' pee" is certainly interesting. The next time it rains, I suppose I'll say "The angels are peeing on me!" LOL Login to Reply Beryl Edmonds Date: 10/7/2021 2:36:00 PM That made me laugh Milton, you’ve reminded me of the song “Why does it always rain on me” in future I’ll sing “ Why do angels always pee on me”… Thank you, Belle

Jan Allison Date: 10/7/2021 2:04:00 PM such a fun poem Belle, I am still working on my effort:-) hugs jan xx Login to Reply Beryl Edmonds Date: 10/7/2021 2:12:00 PM Thank you Jan, you’re for sure to come up with something wonderful… Hugs, Belle:-) xx

Jenna Logan Date: 10/7/2021 1:52:00 PM Fun write, Belle, but I'll think about your lines the next time I'm caught in the rain. Login to Reply Beryl Edmonds Date: 10/7/2021 1:54:00 PM Thank you Jenna, I suspect I will do that too, rain will never seem the same again… Belle