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Heavenly Flushes It makes one wonder if the angels blush When heavenly loos need a stately flush When it pees with rain do they feel exposed Are toilets in heaven made from fine gold. There’s another thing that I’d wish to know To where o where do heaven’s flushes flow Is pee angel rain, is earth heaven’s drain Is that what helps grow a floral domain. I got an answer that came in a dream Heaven has a purifying machine Angels pee is scent with magic content Made from the master’s creative intent. So do not be afraid to drink water Every sister, brother, son or daughter Streams, rivers and sea are pure as can be Thank the angels for their gift of sweet pee. 7th October 2021 The Throne in Heaven Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Jack Webster

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 10/14/2021 11:00:00 PM

This is such fun and so creatively written and indeed very different and insightful - these questions do rise in our minds, and we must understand and interpret it as we think it is. Love this poem Belle. Kind regards, Jenny.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/15/2021 2:08:00 PM

Thank you Jenny, the poem was fun to write for the contest, if snowflakes are angel kisses, then maybe it’s true rain is their sweet wishes… Belle

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 10/11/2021 7:43:00 PM

Hello Belle ... you've put me off drinking water Belle. The only sweet pea I prefer is the one that grows in the garden - thank you Belle - Lindsay

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/15/2021 2:05:00 PM

Hi Lindsay… Always drink water without it we’d die, ha - thanks a lot and keep drinking sweet pee… Belle

Silpika Kalita

Date: 10/11/2021 3:41:00 AM

Absolutely in love with the flow and the rhythm! Brilliant juxtaposition of earthly and heavenly imageries! Best wishes for the contest!

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/11/2021 6:56:00 AM

Thank you so much Silpika, love that word “juxtaposition” haven’t seen or heard of it before… Belle

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/8/2021 4:54:00 AM

WoW! Belle, I enjoyed your take on the contest theme. Good solution/answer to, if it was a throne room in heaven. Congratulations in advance. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/8/2021 7:26:00 AM

Thank you very much Alexis, you have a wonderful day too… Belle :-)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/8/2021 1:21:00 AM

A fun write. Wishing you good luck for the contest.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/8/2021 2:13:00 AM

Thank you so very much indeed Victor… Belle

Sotto Poet

Date: 10/7/2021 2:55:00 PM

Nice take for the contest and fun write not to forget, especially when it rains..good luck, Belle.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/7/2021 3:19:00 PM

The contest is fun and it was fun to write the poem. Rain will never be the same for me, I’ll always think of it as angels pee. Thank you for the comments and goods wishes Lasaad… Belle

L Milton Hankins

Date: 10/7/2021 2:30:00 PM

This was obviously a fun write, Belle, and I enjoyed reading it. To think of rain as "angels' pee" is certainly interesting. The next time it rains, I suppose I'll say "The angels are peeing on me!" LOL

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/7/2021 2:36:00 PM

That made me laugh Milton, you’ve reminded me of the song “Why does it always rain on me” in future I’ll sing “ Why do angels always pee on me”… Thank you, Belle

Jan Allison

Date: 10/7/2021 2:04:00 PM

such a fun poem Belle, I am still working on my effort:-) hugs jan xx

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/7/2021 2:12:00 PM

Thank you Jan, you’re for sure to come up with something wonderful… Hugs, Belle:-) xx

Jenna Logan

Date: 10/7/2021 1:52:00 PM

Fun write, Belle, but I'll think about your lines the next time I'm caught in the rain.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/7/2021 1:54:00 PM

Thank you Jenna, I suspect I will do that too, rain will never seem the same again… Belle