Beryl Edmonds Poet Rhyme

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Heavenly Flushes

Heavenly Flushes
It makes one wonder if the angels blush
When heavenly loos need a stately flush
When it pees with rain do they feel exposed
Are toilets in heaven made from fine gold.

There’s another thing that I’d wish to know
To where o where do heaven’s flushes flow
Is pee angel rain, is earth heaven’s drain
Is that what helps grow a floral domain.

I got an answer that came in a dream
Heaven has a purifying machine
Angels pee is scent with magic content
Made from the master’s creative intent.

So do not be afraid to drink water
Every sister, brother, son or daughter 
Streams, rivers and sea are pure as can be
Thank the angels for their gift of sweet pee.
7th October 2021

The Throne in Heaven Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Jack Webster

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Jennifer Proxenos October 14, 2021 at 11:00 PM This is such fun and so creatively written and indeed very different and insightful - these questions do rise in our minds, and we must understand and interpret it as we think it is. Love this poem Belle. Kind regards, Jenny. Beryl Edmonds October 15, 2021 at 2:08 PM Thank you Jenny, the poem was fun to write for the contest, if snowflakes are angel kisses, then maybe it’s true rain is their sweet wishes… Belle

Lindsay Laurie October 11, 2021 at 7:43 PM Hello Belle ... you've put me off drinking water Belle. The only sweet pea I prefer is the one that grows in the garden - thank you Belle - Lindsay Beryl Edmonds October 15, 2021 at 2:05 PM Hi Lindsay… Always drink water without it we’d die, ha - thanks a lot and keep drinking sweet pee… Belle

Silpika Kalita October 11, 2021 at 3:41 AM Absolutely in love with the flow and the rhythm! Brilliant juxtaposition of earthly and heavenly imageries! Best wishes for the contest! Beryl Edmonds October 11, 2021 at 6:56 AM Thank you so much Silpika, love that word “juxtaposition” haven’t seen or heard of it before… Belle

Alexis Y. October 8, 2021 at 4:54 AM WoW! Belle, I enjoyed your take on the contest theme. Good solution/answer to, if it was a throne room in heaven. Congratulations in advance. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis Beryl Edmonds October 8, 2021 at 7:26 AM Thank you very much Alexis, you have a wonderful day too… Belle :-)

Victor Buhagiar October 8, 2021 at 1:21 AM A fun write. Wishing you good luck for the contest. Beryl Edmonds October 8, 2021 at 2:13 AM Thank you so very much indeed Victor… Belle

Sotto Poet October 7, 2021 at 2:55 PM Nice take for the contest and fun write not to forget, especially when it rains..good luck, Belle. Beryl Edmonds October 7, 2021 at 3:19 PM The contest is fun and it was fun to write the poem. Rain will never be the same for me, I’ll always think of it as angels pee. Thank you for the comments and goods wishes Lasaad… Belle

L Milton Hankins October 7, 2021 at 2:30 PM This was obviously a fun write, Belle, and I enjoyed reading it. To think of rain as "angels' pee" is certainly interesting. The next time it rains, I suppose I'll say "The angels are peeing on me!" LOL Beryl Edmonds October 7, 2021 at 2:36 PM That made me laugh Milton, you’ve reminded me of the song “Why does it always rain on me” in future I’ll sing “ Why do angels always pee on me”… Thank you, Belle

Jan Allison October 7, 2021 at 2:04 PM such a fun poem Belle, I am still working on my effort:-) hugs jan xx Beryl Edmonds October 7, 2021 at 2:12 PM Thank you Jan, you’re for sure to come up with something wonderful… Hugs, Belle:-) xx

Jenna Logan October 7, 2021 at 1:52 PM Fun write, Belle, but I'll think about your lines the next time I'm caught in the rain. Beryl Edmonds October 7, 2021 at 1:54 PM Thank you Jenna, I suspect I will do that too, rain will never seem the same again… Belle