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Heavenly Fixtures Created By One Star

On day one, how sunny was the sunlight? Did prodigious brightness, blast… the sun delight, its birth? The first time in the sky was nightlight blue? The moonlight, was it waxing - Was it festive blue at birth? Fruit chewed from sin’s tree by Eve and Adam Did clouds shadow sun and moon the first time sin was chewed? Day and night switched places, bleak was the cross. The moon bled red…the son died. With men, Jesus switched places. On the third day, hallelujah sunrise Jesus walked out of the grave. Salvation light, the third day. A multitude of stars, Abraham saw when God pointed out his sons — one star, one famed night sky 10/7/6 per kimo verse with chiastic structure (Hopefully I have done it justice)

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Date: 3/24/2022 6:12:00 AM
Very beautiful writing, Kim; deeply moving and comforting. "The moon bled red…the son died. With men, Jesus switched places." He did indeed, take on our sins, going back to heaven, opening a door, and leaving it ajar for us. And he also came back to us, to dwell amongst us as the Holy Spirit:) The Second Coming is our acceptance.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/24/2022 6:28:00 AM
Thank you, Joe! I appreciate you and your comment!
Date: 3/24/2022 5:28:00 AM
I enjoyed this biblical lesson Kim, best wishes
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/24/2022 6:28:00 AM
Thank you, Joseph!
Date: 3/23/2022 9:28:00 PM
What a sublime write! You did justice to the form.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/24/2022 6:28:00 AM
Thank you, JCB!
Date: 3/23/2022 8:10:00 PM
I especialluy love 'hallelujah sunrise.' A beautiful poem, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/24/2022 6:29:00 AM
I love that you love that part! Thank you!
Date: 3/23/2022 3:45:00 PM
So pretty are the images. I especially enjoyed the ones when day and night switched places. Awesome, Kim
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/23/2022 5:43:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea!

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