Heavenly Father

Heavenly Father Our World . . .

shakes
every time you walk

crumbles
when your anger rages

floods 
every time you cry

dark 
till your light shines

thunders
When you speak

you teach us lessons

hurt
to prove we are alive

love
so we are not alone 

loss
so we may become strong

LIFE
so we may have stories to tell in the land of gold

you've given us everything . . .
so at the end we give you are soul
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Ledwell Avatar
August 22, 2013 at 2:34 AM
Well done my friend ;-)
Zerbst Avatar
November 24, 2012 at 9:56 AM
This is a powerful poem with good description. A good outloook on life too. God bless you, Isaiah
Mcconnell Avatar
October 24, 2012 at 9:38 AM
excellent write, looking forward to read more from you. God bless you, Gordon
Melody Avatar
October 25, 2012 at 2:39 PM
thank you :)
Carrillo Avatar
June 4, 2012 at 5:16 PM
This is a very good prayer/poem. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
Melody Avatar
August 31, 2012 at 9:52 PM
thank you :)
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