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this was written by both of us as a gift to the carmelite sisters for all the good work they do around the world 

Your living water breathes warmth across the waves 
The Lord's prayer flutters inside the blessed wings of an angel
Our Holy Spirit Father of this Universe

Whom is the King of Israel
Artist of Eden in heaven, you are crowned above all angels
Hallowed be Thy Name Most High 

Onto your Kingdom we come
Paradise with You is full of peace and love where all is good
The salt of our sins are forgiven as they fall upon the sand

O Merciful Forgiving Father
Kiss our wounds as we kneel down to profess our love for you
In the seat of royal David in Bethlehem where you were born

Our Lady of Mount Carmel
We pray to you in our most dire needs
To keep our families safe from all harms 

Let them be aware of earthly treacheries
Let them have the gift of clarity to know the differences
And let us be kind and loving in our tones always

Beloved Saint Teresa of Jesus Little Flower
Keep us focused on our spiritual light within
Lead us far from worldly desires and temptations
Let not humans forget their dignities
Let not humans lose their faith or souls
Let us contemplate in Prayer
Community and Servitude Amen


Christmas theme collaboration "Heavenly Body and Soul"
Co-written with Liam Mc Daid and Angeline Lim

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 12/8/2016 9:05:00 PM
This is very inspirational. I can read this daily as part of my prayers. Thank you Liam and Angeline for this beautiful prayer. One of my fave :) Merry Christmas
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Angeline Haikutwinkle
Date: 12/9/2016 3:37:00 AM
Thank you for your beautiful comment. God Bless!
Date: 12/5/2016 11:52:00 PM
A pleasure writing this with you dear
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Date: 12/3/2016 5:42:00 PM
Hi Liam!This is a very beautiful n' outstanding spiritual piece, that you have written here in this collaboration with Angeline, my dearest friend Liam.Very spiritual n' inspirational about our Lord and Savior Jesus Christ.I truly enjoy it! Just dazzling!Very beautifully written piece Liam!Just awesome!Excellent imagery! Great collaboration! Just excellent!Your pens are truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + to each!A fav! Beautiful prayer!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic, gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're better in everything,Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your Faith!And keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))I hope that you're feeling much better n' recovering quickly from your very sad and tragic accident,Liam.Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you always!Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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