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Heavenly Bliss

We sat on a wooden bench, beneath the verdant bower Interlaced with the powerful fragrant scented jasmine, and the variegated leaves of the Virginia creeper that turns to crimson as autumn flourishes. Red crested birds flew around. Some rested on juniper or oak trees scattered around the garden, mindful that the time of rest was near. We were in heavenly bliss whispering sweet nothings. Soon darkness began to fall and the gardens had to be closed. We drifted towards the secluded beach. Salt air refreshed us from the summer heat. Quick enough we tossed off our outer clothes and jumped into the cool smooth sea. Tired we lay in tender serenity on the clean fine sand. Until I drew my wife near. Fire flies flickered, the wane sun slithered beneath the horizon, but we remained still, alone throughout the night awaiting sunrise as we enjoyed our heavenly bliss.

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Date: 3/31/2021 12:45:00 PM
Ahh!! So romantic. Enjoyed reading your well thought out work. Thanks for the visit. Sara
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Date: 3/26/2021 7:28:00 PM
You have created a picture of paradise, Victor. Sea and sand, natural beauty and romance, nightfall and a joyous sunrise. Lovely! :=)
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Date: 3/26/2021 2:34:00 PM
Beautiful imagery and romance Victor!
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Date: 3/26/2021 1:17:00 PM
Victor my friend your poem is beautiful yet so sad. From the depths of my heart I wish and hope that your wife visits you every night in your dreams. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 3/26/2021 12:47:00 PM
Hi Victor, You painted such a beautiful and romantic scene.Good content and imagery. Have a great day and weekend:-) Alexis
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Date: 3/25/2021 6:44:00 PM
Been reading a number of your new poems really wonderful'
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Date: 3/25/2021 2:43:00 PM
A lovely write, Victor. You share wonderful memories here. Have a great day :)
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Date: 3/25/2021 6:15:00 AM
I think you draw your wife close at every turn...you loved her so. Hugs...K8m
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Date: 3/25/2021 4:46:00 AM
A soft, romantic write that tugs at one's heartstrings, Victor:)
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Date: 3/25/2021 3:37:00 AM
A very romantic verse that you write so well Victor, happy memories that will stay with you forever. Tom
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Date: 3/25/2021 3:32:00 AM
- Beautiful, soft and romantic, Victor :) - A wonderful poem :) - Have a lovely day :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/25/2021 1:25:00 AM
What a beautiful, romantic memory. Loved this Victor. The description here let me see two young lovers walking in the moonlight along the shore. Excellent as always. God Bless, JB
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Date: 3/24/2021 4:50:00 PM
such beautiful scenery and feelings,and I am guessing memories as well.
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Date: 3/24/2021 3:56:00 PM
That was indeed a blissful outing, Victor. Delightfully romantic--enjoyed the details your images reveal. The ending is full of passion--of course, as it should be for two in love.
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Date: 3/24/2021 3:56:00 PM
Hello Victor, oh Victor, this is so romantic. i felt the love between the two of you. Enjoy your evening my friend.
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Date: 3/24/2021 3:32:00 PM
great imagery and sense of romantic feeling. Hugs eve
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Date: 3/24/2021 1:23:00 PM
oh so beautiful and romantic Victor and the ending is so tender:-) hugs Jan xx
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