Adeleke Adeite Poet Diamante

Heaven...Hell

hell                                        
               hostile, haughty
         weeping, wailing, wishing
     Satan, sinners, savior, saved ones
         Singing, smiling, shining
              Golden, gorgeous
                      Heaven

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September 12, 2009 at 9:41 AM Powerful and thought provoking poem. I'm hoping to come out on the side of heaven. Nice use of this challenging form. Thank you for taking time to comment on my blog. It was nice to hear from you. Karen

Elaine George August 28, 2009 at 2:02 AM My Goodness Adeleke, you have written three of these. Very well done. I wrote one a long time ago entitled Black and white about God and the Devil. You have mastered this form. Lainie

Jayne Eggins August 23, 2009 at 9:28 AM Traveling from darkness to light this is wonderful Adeleke ... thank you for your comments on my poems I havent been well but I am back now and can start reading again lol ... love Jayne x x

James Knox August 22, 2009 at 9:52 AM great job .... i can see both places clearly through your expression, keep up the good work , thank you for your wonderful comment ... i very much appreciate it :)