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Fragmented Rhyme

invented by Constance La France has 14 lines with lots of indentation and a rhyme pattern to follow. Do not divide it into stanzas.

Line 1- Indent 24 spaces - A

Line 2- Indent 12 spaces- B

Line 3- A

Line 4- B

Line 5- Indent 24 spaces- C

Line 6- C

Line 7- C

Line 8- Indent 6 spaces-    D

Line 9- Indent 12 spaces-  D

Line 10-Indent 24 spaces- D

Line 11- A

Line 12-Indent 12 spaces- B

Line 13-Indent 6 spaces-   C

Line 14-Indent 12            D

Nothing mortal or tangible lasts forever but nature's rules don't apply to the soul; at death, all bonds between mortal and immortal sever, and your spirit constitutes the whole. Your concept of heaven will manifest, and you will feel you are loved and blessed fulfilling all the scriptures suggest. Your soul hopes to find a merciful, forgiving God, even though deep down you believed Him a fraud; but only He can judge, whether you’re broken or flawed. There is no way of knowing whatsoever, but should you arrive there repentant, don't dread the toll; God already loves you; it doesn’t matter if you were stupid or clever, all that your being will be feeling is awed. (Fragmented Rhyme)

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Date: 5/24/2019 10:22:00 AM
Emile, you penned a beautiful poem in Fragmentefld Rhyme. This is going in my Favs!
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Date: 5/24/2019 8:21:00 PM
Thanks Constance, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.