Heaven Sent Peak

April showers fall,
but who cares when spellbound hearts,
gripped by love’s first flush,
revel in heaven sent peaks,
an endless rainbow blossom
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Kendrick Avatar
June 16, 2026 at 5:19 AM
Young love is a once in a lifetime event that everyone needs to experience and you have described it very well, Howard. Thank you for sharing these thoughts about it. Sara K.
Kerr Avatar
June 16, 2026 at 6:05 AM
You are very welcome, Sara. In turn I greatly appreciate your constructive comments. They boost my morale. Howard
Dietrich Avatar
February 13, 2021 at 9:35 AM
This is very lovely, especially that final line, Howard.
Krutsinger Avatar
July 21, 2020 at 11:09 PM
I ran up to see what the form was because this read so wonderfully well. I had forgotten about a tanka. Thank you for a sage reminder in such a delicate and delightful missive!
Kerr Avatar
July 22, 2020 at 12:33 AM
I’m pleased you enjoyed it, Caren. Many thanks for your observations howard
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