Heaven Sent

My girlfriend’s love never ceases
My girlfriend loves me to pieces
My girlfriend takes away my breath
My girlfriend just loves me to death

Too young to be passing so soon
(Services to be held at noon)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
March 23, 2014 at 8:44 AM
very clever, like it xx
Callus Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 12:51 PM
Wow I love this one! black s)c)ent humour, I would say :) // paul
Macfarlane Avatar
March 15, 2014 at 11:23 AM
Ha, ha Tim....what a way to go! Cute write. Hugs
A   Avatar
March 14, 2014 at 11:55 PM
Hello Tim, OI OI OI! LOL, you sure know how to make an end to a good way to go... Enjoyed always~ Linda
Richards Avatar
March 14, 2014 at 8:36 PM
You always have a way to make me smile !!! I love your sense of humor......are you sure you aren't related...?? (you remind me of the guys in my family!! :) and that is a good thing!
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