Heaven Sent

I once thought you had been heaven sent, 
but now you bring all this mad ferment.  
Your crazy emotions 
and endless commotions 
tell me we were never heaven meant.

girlfriend-boyfriendheavenheavenlimerick

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Andrea Dietrich

August 18, 2011 at 10:33 PM

YEs, time to let that one "fly back to heaven." Hey, don't take my tyburn personally. That's admitting you are a sod. hahaha. Anyway, my hubbie snores and I haven't done anything bad yet!!!(so the poem is just fiction!)

John Smith

August 19, 2011 at 8:26 AM

Oops! I woke in the middle of the night to realize I wrote 'Mary Cope' in my note when it's 'Wendy Cope.' Horrors; and you an English teacher.

John Smith

August 18, 2011 at 11:24 PM

My comment was tongue-in-cheek. Please, don't take me too seriously. I see a humorous world. I can't write deep emotional poems; I've tried. Ogden Nash, Mary Cope: my poetry gods. But if you were my teacher, I'd bring you a big apple.