Heaven Sent

I once thought you had been heaven sent, 
but now you bring all this mad ferment.  
Your crazy emotions 
and endless commotions 
tell me we were never heaven meant.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 8/18/2011 10:33:00 PM
YEs, time to let that one "fly back to heaven." Hey, don't take my tyburn personally. That's admitting you are a sod. hahaha. Anyway, my hubbie snores and I haven't done anything bad yet!!!(so the poem is just fiction!)
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John Smith
Date: 8/19/2011 8:26:00 AM
Oops! I woke in the middle of the night to realize I wrote 'Mary Cope' in my note when it's 'Wendy Cope.' Horrors; and you an English teacher.
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John Smith
Date: 8/18/2011 11:24:00 PM
My comment was tongue-in-cheek. Please, don't take me too seriously. I see a humorous world. I can't write deep emotional poems; I've tried. Ogden Nash, Mary Cope: my poetry gods. But if you were my teacher, I'd bring you a big apple.
Date: 8/1/2011 9:26:00 PM
Nice soft humor, John
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Date: 8/1/2011 3:53:00 PM
a bit of laughter at last, been reading nothing but couples breaking up. this site is more like a counselling service. oh a good write. i like a lot
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John Smith
Date: 8/1/2011 10:06:00 PM
Yes, it is a veritable litany of shattered loves; it reads rather like some country western songs sound. I do enjoy yours, though.
Date: 8/1/2011 1:23:00 PM
Lovely humor and wit , John
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