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Heaven Sent

a chariot of fire streaks across the sky – I beg for forgiveness 

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Contest: Heavenly Monoku
Hosted by Kim Rodrigues
Placed 1st
© 26th January 2019 

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 3/9/2019 7:43:00 AM
Interesting work. Congrats on your winner. Sara
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Date: 3/9/2019 8:11:00 AM
Thank you Sara. Have a nice weekend. Regards // paul
Date: 2/1/2019 6:28:00 PM
Congrats on the winner list, my friend.
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Date: 2/2/2019 8:18:00 AM
Thank you for returning with congrats, Andrea. In my opinion your monoku was one of the best entries! Regards // paul
Date: 1/31/2019 4:52:00 PM
Very powerful and inspirational, Paul. Congratulations on your win in the contest. Sandra
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Date: 2/2/2019 8:16:00 AM
Thank you, Sandra. Enjoy the weekend. Regards // paul
Date: 1/31/2019 12:17:00 PM
Great inspirational Monoku, Paul. Congratulations on your win. ~`* Eve
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Date: 2/2/2019 6:38:00 AM
Incidentally I have just read your winning entry, Eve, and I also found it inspirational! Thank you & hugs // paul
Date: 1/30/2019 3:51:00 PM
Oooooh! a graphic expression of humility and repentance. So artfully done Paul. Congrats on your win in Kim's contest. Best wishes, Gershon
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Date: 2/2/2019 8:09:00 AM
Thank you for your kind comments, and congrats, Gershon. Regards // paul
Date: 1/30/2019 3:41:00 PM
Fear strikes as reality sets in. Congrats on your win, Paul! xo Kim
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Date: 2/2/2019 6:19:00 AM
Thank you very much, Kim! Your contest racked in many worthy entries! Even a one-liner is not as simple as some make it out to be. Regards and enjoy the weekend. // paul
Date: 1/30/2019 1:23:00 PM
How lovely! Sure to be a winner, Paul. Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 2/2/2019 6:17:00 AM
Thank you Carolyn; still catching up on comments!! Hugs // paul
Date: 1/29/2019 8:58:00 PM
I love this but I think you have nothing to fear, was probably after me!!! :)
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Date: 2/2/2019 6:16:00 AM
Nah, Arthur...probably after us and many others!!:) I fear those who claim to be saints on earth! Regards // paul
Date: 1/29/2019 3:30:00 PM
oh, love this, Paul
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Date: 2/2/2019 5:47:00 AM
Thank you, my friend. Regards // paul
Date: 1/29/2019 3:24:00 PM
wonderful, Paul. you are on fire with poetry like this.
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Date: 2/2/2019 5:40:00 AM
That is so kind of you, Andrea...thank you:) Regards // paul
Date: 1/29/2019 12:42:00 PM
signs tell us of our need for atonement... glorious in content and phrasing, paul...huggs
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Date: 1/29/2019 1:05:00 PM
Thank you, Nette; you read my one-liner very well :) Hugs // paul
Date: 1/28/2019 3:17:00 PM
The powers that exceed our limits of perception and endurance render us vulnerable seeking grace and mercy! Great Monoku capturing a wealth of insight! A great delight to read your beauty, Paul.. Deepest regards. Blessings.
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Date: 1/29/2019 12:05:00 PM
Thank you for your insightful comments, Besma. So pleased you enjoyed this humble one-liner. Warm regards // paul
Date: 1/28/2019 6:22:00 AM
Powerful message! Great Monoku, Paul. Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 1/29/2019 11:49:00 AM
Thank you very much, Supraja. Regards // paul
Date: 1/27/2019 4:43:00 PM
Love this, truly makes one's imagination work,
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Date: 1/29/2019 11:48:00 AM
Thank you, Harry. Regards // paul
Date: 1/27/2019 4:25:00 PM
Brilliant one liner Paul..
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Date: 1/29/2019 11:48:00 AM
Thanks a lot, S-1. Regards // paul
Date: 1/27/2019 1:06:00 PM
Wow Paul - written with great foresight - love the choice of words in this Monoku! Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 1/27/2019 2:08:00 PM
Thank you for your generosity, Jenny. So pleased that it appealed to you. Warm regards and p/h to you too. // paul
Date: 1/27/2019 11:30:00 AM
The apocalypse is at hand. But I think we have to wait a bit more. Great and concise.
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Date: 1/27/2019 2:07:00 PM
Thank you, Victor. I was going to add some footnotes (as suggested by the sponsor), but then realized there was no need. Regards // paul
Date: 1/27/2019 7:23:00 AM
Well written, Paul..message well received.
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Date: 1/27/2019 2:05:00 PM
Thank you, Vijay. Glad the message arrived over there:) Regards // paul
Date: 1/27/2019 6:32:00 AM
That day will surely come, well written Paul. Good luck. Tom.
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Date: 1/27/2019 2:04:00 PM
It certainly will, Tom! Thank you for reading and liking. Regards // paul
Date: 1/26/2019 7:11:00 PM
Excellent Paul! :)
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Date: 1/27/2019 2:04:00 PM
Excellent is more than I merit, Heidi. Thank you :) Regards // paul
Date: 1/26/2019 6:36:00 PM
Paul, this is wonderful line deserving of a top win in the contest - best of luck - Bob
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Date: 1/27/2019 2:03:00 PM
You are too kind, Robert! Thank you, my friend. Regards // paul
Date: 1/26/2019 6:34:00 PM
WoW! Paul, Your one-liner is powerful. Good imagery as well. I wish you the best of luck for the contest:-) Alexis
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Date: 1/27/2019 2:02:00 PM
So pleased that you found it so much to your liking, Alexis...thank you! Regards // paul