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Heaven Sent

a chariot of fire streaks across the sky – I beg for forgiveness 

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Contest: Heavenly Monoku
Hosted by Kim Rodrigues
Placed 1st
© 26th January 2019

Copyright © Paul Callus | Year Posted 2019

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Sara Kendrick Date: 3/9/2019 7:43:00 AM Interesting work. Congrats on your winner. Sara Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 3/9/2019 8:11:00 AM Thank you Sara. Have a nice weekend. Regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich Date: 2/1/2019 6:28:00 PM Congrats on the winner list, my friend. Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 2/2/2019 8:18:00 AM Thank you for returning with congrats, Andrea. In my opinion your monoku was one of the best entries! Regards // paul

Sandra Haight Date: 1/31/2019 4:52:00 PM Very powerful and inspirational, Paul. Congratulations on your win in the contest. Sandra Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 2/2/2019 8:16:00 AM Thank you, Sandra. Enjoy the weekend. Regards // paul

Eve Roper Date: 1/31/2019 12:17:00 PM Great inspirational Monoku, Paul. Congratulations on your win. ~`* Eve Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 2/2/2019 6:38:00 AM Incidentally I have just read your winning entry, Eve, and I also found it inspirational! Thank you & hugs // paul

Gershon Wolf Date: 1/30/2019 3:51:00 PM Oooooh! a graphic expression of humility and repentance. So artfully done Paul. Congrats on your win in Kim's contest. Best wishes, Gershon Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 2/2/2019 8:09:00 AM Thank you for your kind comments, and congrats, Gershon. Regards // paul

Kim Rodrigues Date: 1/30/2019 3:41:00 PM Fear strikes as reality sets in. Congrats on your win, Paul! xo Kim Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 2/2/2019 6:19:00 AM Thank you very much, Kim! Your contest racked in many worthy entries! Even a one-liner is not as simple as some make it out to be. Regards and enjoy the weekend. // paul

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 1/30/2019 1:23:00 PM How lovely! Sure to be a winner, Paul. Hugs, Carolyn Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 2/2/2019 6:17:00 AM Thank you Carolyn; still catching up on comments!! Hugs // paul

Arthur Vaso Date: 1/29/2019 8:58:00 PM I love this but I think you have nothing to fear, was probably after me!!! :) Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 2/2/2019 6:16:00 AM Nah, Arthur...probably after us and many others!!:) I fear those who claim to be saints on earth! Regards // paul

Jack Horne Date: 1/29/2019 3:30:00 PM oh, love this, Paul Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 2/2/2019 5:47:00 AM Thank you, my friend. Regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/29/2019 3:24:00 PM wonderful, Paul. you are on fire with poetry like this. Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 2/2/2019 5:40:00 AM That is so kind of you, Andrea...thank you:) Regards // paul

Nette Onclaud Date: 1/29/2019 12:42:00 PM signs tell us of our need for atonement... glorious in content and phrasing, paul...huggs Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 1/29/2019 1:05:00 PM Thank you, Nette; you read my one-liner very well :) Hugs // paul

Besma Riabi Dziri Date: 1/28/2019 3:17:00 PM The powers that exceed our limits of perception and endurance render us vulnerable seeking grace and mercy! Great Monoku capturing a wealth of insight! A great delight to read your beauty, Paul.. Deepest regards. Blessings. Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 1/29/2019 12:05:00 PM Thank you for your insightful comments, Besma. So pleased you enjoyed this humble one-liner. Warm regards // paul

Supraja Kannan Date: 1/28/2019 6:22:00 AM Powerful message! Great Monoku, Paul. Thanks for sharing. Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 1/29/2019 11:49:00 AM Thank you very much, Supraja. Regards // paul

Harry Horsman Date: 1/27/2019 4:43:00 PM Love this, truly makes one's imagination work, Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 1/29/2019 11:48:00 AM Thank you, Harry. Regards // paul

Silent One Date: 1/27/2019 4:25:00 PM Brilliant one liner Paul.. Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 1/29/2019 11:48:00 AM Thanks a lot, S-1. Regards // paul

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 1/27/2019 1:06:00 PM Wow Paul - written with great foresight - love the choice of words in this Monoku! Poetry hugs, Jennifer. Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 1/27/2019 2:08:00 PM Thank you for your generosity, Jenny. So pleased that it appealed to you. Warm regards and p/h to you too. // paul

Vijay Pandit Date: 1/27/2019 7:23:00 AM Well written, Paul..message well received. Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 1/27/2019 2:05:00 PM Thank you, Vijay. Glad the message arrived over there:) Regards // paul

Tom Cunningham Date: 1/27/2019 6:32:00 AM That day will surely come, well written Paul. Good luck. Tom. Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 1/27/2019 2:04:00 PM It certainly will, Tom! Thank you for reading and liking. Regards // paul

Heidi Sands Date: 1/26/2019 7:11:00 PM Excellent Paul! :) Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 1/27/2019 2:04:00 PM Excellent is more than I merit, Heidi. Thank you :) Regards // paul

Robert L. Hinshaw Date: 1/26/2019 6:36:00 PM Paul, this is wonderful line deserving of a top win in the contest - best of luck - Bob Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 1/27/2019 2:03:00 PM You are too kind, Robert! Thank you, my friend. Regards // paul

Alexis Y. Date: 1/26/2019 6:34:00 PM WoW! Paul, Your one-liner is powerful. Good imagery as well. I wish you the best of luck for the contest:-) Alexis Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 1/27/2019 2:02:00 PM So pleased that you found it so much to your liking, Alexis...thank you! Regards // paul