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a chariot of fire streaks across the sky – I beg for forgiveness - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Contest: Heavenly Monoku Hosted by Kim Rodrigues Placed 1st © 26th January 2019

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/9/2019 7:43:00 AM

Interesting work. Congrats on your winner. Sara

Paul Callus
Date: 3/9/2019 8:11:00 AM

Thank you Sara. Have a nice weekend. Regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/1/2019 6:28:00 PM

Congrats on the winner list, my friend.

Paul Callus
Date: 2/2/2019 8:18:00 AM

Thank you for returning with congrats, Andrea. In my opinion your monoku was one of the best entries! Regards // paul

Sandra Haight

Date: 1/31/2019 4:52:00 PM

Very powerful and inspirational, Paul. Congratulations on your win in the contest. Sandra

Paul Callus
Date: 2/2/2019 8:16:00 AM

Thank you, Sandra. Enjoy the weekend. Regards // paul

Eve Roper

Date: 1/31/2019 12:17:00 PM

Great inspirational Monoku, Paul. Congratulations on your win. ~`* Eve

Paul Callus
Date: 2/2/2019 6:38:00 AM

Incidentally I have just read your winning entry, Eve, and I also found it inspirational! Thank you & hugs // paul

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/30/2019 3:51:00 PM

Oooooh! a graphic expression of humility and repentance. So artfully done Paul. Congrats on your win in Kim's contest. Best wishes, Gershon

Paul Callus
Date: 2/2/2019 8:09:00 AM

Thank you for your kind comments, and congrats, Gershon. Regards // paul

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/30/2019 3:41:00 PM

Fear strikes as reality sets in. Congrats on your win, Paul! xo Kim

Paul Callus
Date: 2/2/2019 6:19:00 AM

Thank you very much, Kim! Your contest racked in many worthy entries! Even a one-liner is not as simple as some make it out to be. Regards and enjoy the weekend. // paul

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/30/2019 1:23:00 PM

How lovely! Sure to be a winner, Paul. Hugs, Carolyn

Paul Callus
Date: 2/2/2019 6:17:00 AM

Thank you Carolyn; still catching up on comments!! Hugs // paul

Arthur Vaso

Date: 1/29/2019 8:58:00 PM

I love this but I think you have nothing to fear, was probably after me!!! :)

Paul Callus
Date: 2/2/2019 6:16:00 AM

Nah, Arthur...probably after us and many others!!:) I fear those who claim to be saints on earth! Regards // paul

Jack Horne

Date: 1/29/2019 3:30:00 PM

oh, love this, Paul

Paul Callus
Date: 2/2/2019 5:47:00 AM

Thank you, my friend. Regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/29/2019 3:24:00 PM

wonderful, Paul. you are on fire with poetry like this.

Paul Callus
Date: 2/2/2019 5:40:00 AM

That is so kind of you, Andrea...thank you:) Regards // paul

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/29/2019 12:42:00 PM

signs tell us of our need for atonement... glorious in content and phrasing, paul...huggs

Paul Callus
Date: 1/29/2019 1:05:00 PM

Thank you, Nette; you read my one-liner very well :) Hugs // paul

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 1/28/2019 3:17:00 PM

The powers that exceed our limits of perception and endurance render us vulnerable seeking grace and mercy! Great Monoku capturing a wealth of insight! A great delight to read your beauty, Paul.. Deepest regards. Blessings.

Paul Callus
Date: 1/29/2019 12:05:00 PM

Thank you for your insightful comments, Besma. So pleased you enjoyed this humble one-liner. Warm regards // paul