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Heaven Sent

a chariot of fire streaks across the sky – I beg for forgiveness 

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Contest: Heavenly Monoku
Hosted by Kim Rodrigues
Placed 1st
© 26th January 2019

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Sara Kendrick

March 9, 2019 at 7:43 AM

Interesting work. Congrats on your winner. Sara

Paul Callus

March 9, 2019 at 8:11 AM

Thank you Sara. Have a nice weekend. Regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich

February 1, 2019 at 6:28 PM

Congrats on the winner list, my friend.

Paul Callus

February 2, 2019 at 8:18 AM

Thank you for returning with congrats, Andrea. In my opinion your monoku was one of the best entries! Regards // paul

Sandra Haight

January 31, 2019 at 4:52 PM

Very powerful and inspirational, Paul. Congratulations on your win in the contest. Sandra

Paul Callus

February 2, 2019 at 8:16 AM

Thank you, Sandra. Enjoy the weekend. Regards // paul

Eve Roper

January 31, 2019 at 12:17 PM

Great inspirational Monoku, Paul. Congratulations on your win. ~`* Eve

Paul Callus

February 2, 2019 at 6:38 AM

Incidentally I have just read your winning entry, Eve, and I also found it inspirational! Thank you & hugs // paul

Gershon Wolf

January 30, 2019 at 3:51 PM

Oooooh! a graphic expression of humility and repentance. So artfully done Paul. Congrats on your win in Kim's contest. Best wishes, Gershon

Paul Callus

February 2, 2019 at 8:09 AM

Thank you for your kind comments, and congrats, Gershon. Regards // paul

Kim Rodrigues

January 30, 2019 at 3:41 PM

Fear strikes as reality sets in. Congrats on your win, Paul! xo Kim

Paul Callus

February 2, 2019 at 6:19 AM

Thank you very much, Kim! Your contest racked in many worthy entries! Even a one-liner is not as simple as some make it out to be. Regards and enjoy the weekend. // paul

Carolyn Devonshire

January 30, 2019 at 1:23 PM

How lovely! Sure to be a winner, Paul. Hugs, Carolyn

Paul Callus

February 2, 2019 at 6:17 AM

Thank you Carolyn; still catching up on comments!! Hugs // paul

Arthur Vaso

January 29, 2019 at 8:58 PM

I love this but I think you have nothing to fear, was probably after me!!! :)

Paul Callus

February 2, 2019 at 6:16 AM

Nah, Arthur...probably after us and many others!!:) I fear those who claim to be saints on earth! Regards // paul

Jack Horne

January 29, 2019 at 3:30 PM

oh, love this, Paul

Paul Callus

February 2, 2019 at 5:47 AM

Thank you, my friend. Regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich

January 29, 2019 at 3:24 PM

wonderful, Paul. you are on fire with poetry like this.

Paul Callus

February 2, 2019 at 5:40 AM

That is so kind of you, Andrea...thank you:) Regards // paul

Nette Onclaud

January 29, 2019 at 12:42 PM

signs tell us of our need for atonement... glorious in content and phrasing, paul...huggs

Paul Callus

January 29, 2019 at 1:05 PM

Thank you, Nette; you read my one-liner very well :) Hugs // paul

Besma Riabi Dziri

January 28, 2019 at 3:17 PM

The powers that exceed our limits of perception and endurance render us vulnerable seeking grace and mercy! Great Monoku capturing a wealth of insight! A great delight to read your beauty, Paul.. Deepest regards. Blessings.

Paul Callus

January 29, 2019 at 12:05 PM

Thank you for your insightful comments, Besma. So pleased you enjoyed this humble one-liner. Warm regards // paul