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Heaven Rejoices

The kinda guy a girl dreams about It's within those dreams I found you One who will take away all doubt The only one who would be true You make my stars twinkle up above Making the angels sing their song Showing me a perfect kinda love Letting me feel it's not wrong The winds bow to you my king The breezes are envious of your flow This what we share no normal thing Undying love all I want to ever show The moon's beams smile upon us For he kept me warm at night He never liked my life as it was His beams cupped my face each night Now the heavens rejoice at our paring They made every planet align right That day made our souls so caring Perfection, that we will hold so tight

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Date: 3/24/2020 4:10:00 PM
Congrats Brenda on your #1 win in Brian's contest--a write so tender--I enjoyed the read.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 3/27/2020 12:12:00 PM
Vijay thank you!;)
Date: 3/24/2020 2:18:00 PM
So wonderful to hear your words again. I guess I have missed your entries in other contests. Congratulations on your first place win dear friend.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 3/27/2020 12:12:00 PM
Sam thanks so much!;)
Date: 3/24/2020 12:29:00 PM
Awesome piece, Brenda:-) Congratulations on your first place win, my friend!
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 3/27/2020 12:11:00 PM
Thank you so much!;)
Date: 3/23/2020 9:23:00 PM
A lovely poem written by a lovely girl. I really do hope you are finally feeling a little better, Brenda? A big warm hug to cheer you up! :) john
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 3/23/2020 11:55:00 PM
Ah I needed that hug John ! Thank you so much!;(

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