Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Poet Pleiades

Heaven - Pleiades

Heaven

High above crests descry
heralds angelic hosts. 
Hallelujahs sing to
hallow lazuline skies,
hailing from God's own breath.
Harps strummed in perfect love -
harmonies quench like rain.


Written 2/19 17 for Pleiades H Contest

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Kim Rodrigues February 24, 2017 at 8:05 PM Congrats, Rhonda! Heavenly!

Sushma A. Singh February 24, 2017 at 7:49 PM This is really beautiful. I missed reading it in the first go Heavenly piece on 'Heaven' Congrats!!

Janis Medders Tobechi February 24, 2017 at 4:12 PM What a wonderful place you described so well. Congrats on a beautiful pleiades.

Laura Leiser February 24, 2017 at 11:52 AM This is SO beautiful, Rhonda! Congrats :)

Charlie Smith February 24, 2017 at 8:29 AM Congratulations Rhonda, heaven sent...

Anne-Lise Andresen February 24, 2017 at 2:47 AM - Congratulations on your great poem in Pleiades H contest, Rhonda :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kai Michael Neumann February 24, 2017 at 2:37 AM I like harmonies quenching the rain and harps strummed in perfect love. Heaven on earth, Kai

Eve Roper February 23, 2017 at 11:31 PM Back to congratulate you Hugs Eve

Andrea Dietrich February 23, 2017 at 7:34 PM I think the imagery for your heaven poem is breathtaking. Congrats, Rhonda.

Kim Merryman February 23, 2017 at 5:24 PM A heavenly theme, Rhonda! (Sorry, I couldn't resist!) I love the smooth flow of your lines and the poetic language. Congrats on your 2nd place win! Blessings, Kim

Agnes Krampe February 23, 2017 at 5:18 PM Congrats on your win, Rhonda.

Eve Roper February 20, 2017 at 2:22 PM Wonderful verse, Rhonda, great flow and imagery good luck in the contest.. Hugs Eve

Paul Callus February 20, 2017 at 10:46 AM A heavenly Pleiades, Rhonda! I would gladly pay a long visit to this heaven of yours!! Full marks to you. Regards // paul

Jan Allison February 19, 2017 at 3:53 PM beautiful and uplifting Rhonda:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Laura Leiser February 19, 2017 at 2:44 PM A lovely and descriptive pleiades, Rhonda! I was thinking of doing a heaven one, too, but decided on something different. Good luck in the contest!