Heaven Plato

If stars and painters all share one realm would it be so hard to consume in fact higher the suggestion higher the compliment for truth

(honest is all feature does it cloud one judgment) 

like a heart mint of condition no one pattern colors the out come of mix emotions

(if laughter move a crowd who is a clown is it the one that spoke) 

if words take from the lasting impression room move by the value of talent is a town full of acts or a crown with no motion 

to look row to row to know the feeling of a out come is it truly outlasting the way of the value of success

can a man be made or can a man be told is there a difference between  assumption of value or favorable opposition class out way value.
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July 8, 2016 at 11:04 AM
enjoyed your write Louis, thank you for sharing, **LUV SKAT**
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