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Heaven Awaits

Angelic voices singing praises to the Lord Most High,
God's glory fills the heavens with radiance so bright.
Brilliant rainbow colors all around, a pleasure to the eye,
Holding hands with Jesus, knowing everything's all right.


3/24/12
For Carolyn Devonshire's Perception of Heaven contest

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Poet Destroyer A Date: 3/25/2012 9:57:00 PM Kim, this has a very lovely image. Jesus, waiting to take our hands.. ..take care and have yourself a good night~LUV*PD Login to Reply

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Date: 3/24/2012 5:59:00 PM A beautiful glimpse of Heaven, Kim, walking hand in hand with our Savior. I see no reason why Jesus, who loves His children, would not hold our hands. It is written in the Bible that He held hands while on earth. "Jesus took the blind man by the hand and led him out of the village." -Mark 8:23. God bless you, Rhonda Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/24/2012 4:44:00 PM Beautiful written Kim, luck in contest for you. - oxox love Anne-Lise Login to Reply

Nigel Fox Date: 3/24/2012 4:26:00 PM This very lovely . but I find the close hands with Jesus most weird , You must be speaking figuratively! My apologiies but how dare you ! Login to Reply

Sarah Jabri Date: 3/24/2012 4:23:00 PM Awesome write!...best of luck in the contest <3 Login to Reply

Russell Sivey Date: 3/24/2012 3:09:00 PM I thought this poem to be most pleasing to read! There is hope all throughout it! My favorite line has to be the, "God's glory fills the heavens with radiance so bright" which is so very true, the only other power that I think He would fill the heavens with would be his love for us! Awesome poem that you put together Kim!! I enjoyed your write that I have read this afternoon! I love your poem immensely! Great Work!! Login to Reply