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HEAVEN AND EARTH cherubim cheering, chestnuts o’er fire, plumes of heat in kin’s nighttime sleep, preparing the gift of peace — turtle doves for release. commanded, angels keep watch by moon, stirring breaths of child and their grownups. children smile, their parents groan, at waking up soon to piles of presents at bottom edge of blinking tree. cocoa and coffee speed process of ribbons and paper; joy reacts. 12/9/2020 Double Nonet Poetry Contest Sponsor: William Kekaula
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Date: 12/22/2020 5:18:00 AM
Christmas mornings can be so interesting when there are children in the home. Congrats on your winner. Sara
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/22/2020 6:34:00 AM
So true! We are past that. ;)
Date: 12/21/2020 6:55:00 PM
Thank you for sharing a wondrous part of yourself, Kim, my compliments on your honorable placement, Aloha! William
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/22/2020 6:33:00 AM
Thank you, William!
Date: 12/13/2020 4:55:00 PM
I love how this went from heaven to earth; how joyous and Christmas-like!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/14/2020 2:29:00 AM
Thank you! Merry early Christmas!
Date: 12/13/2020 4:39:00 PM
This is a wonderful picture of the stillness of Christmas Eve, and the joy and exceitment of Christmas morning (and boy do we need that coffee and cocoa) I wish I could figure out how to center mine to look as pretty as yours!
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 12/14/2020 10:13:00 AM
The problem is I don't get what those terms mean, someone has to stand next to me and point at the screen before I get it!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/14/2020 2:33:00 AM
Thank you, sweet Michelle!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/14/2020 2:32:00 AM
wrap “center” in <> with no quotation marks at the beginning and put a slash mark before center / inside those <>
Date: 12/10/2020 4:50:00 AM
Lovely thoughts - Blessings and prayers for your joyous yuletide
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/10/2020 5:20:00 AM
Merry Christmas to you sweet Regina! God bless and thank you!
Date: 12/9/2020 9:37:00 AM
A nonet of joy. Oh how we miss the joy of Christmas. ~~
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/9/2020 5:28:00 PM
The hustle and bustle and joy of it all!
Date: 12/9/2020 9:20:00 AM
Joy of Christmas emanates from your verses, Kim--enjoyed the read of this festive write.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/9/2020 9:22:00 AM
Thank you, dear friend!

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