Heaven

Warm sunshine after rainy, muggy days. Refreshing rain on summer afternoons. A theater of symphonies and plays. My bedroom wafting soft, romantic tunes. The mountains, high, or lowly desert dunes. To feel my tiny baby's fingers cling, or strength of Hubby's arms wrapped tight around. For, Heaven isn't just where angels sing. Within your heart, its beauty will abound, and music to your soul will there be found. 01/21/15 Contest: Dizain me Sponsor: Dr. Ram Mehta

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Eileen Manassian

Date: 1/22/2015 1:15:00 PM

Absolutely flawless....I loved this piece, Arlene. I couldn't agree more...."Heaven is a place on earth" as the song goes. Your poem shows when that is true....Thanks for the many visits to my work today. I appreciate it. Hugs

Poesy Relish

Date: 1/22/2015 10:54:00 AM

#7 ;)

Poesy Relish

Date: 1/22/2015 10:53:00 AM

Simplistic and pure, your heaven lure... love hugs,nad!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/22/2015 4:19:00 AM

- Arlene, a poem for my heart .... I love it !! - Beautiful (7 ++ :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Arlene Smith
Date: 1/22/2015 5:33:00 AM

Think you so much, sweet Anne!... Hugs, dear friend... Arlene

Emile Pinet

Date: 1/21/2015 1:39:00 PM

I can't find anything to fault and therefor there remains only one thing to say....Well done! Emile. #7

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 1/21/2015 1:36:00 PM

Arlene, you have shared some beautiful thoughts of heaven...and the form is one I love! I hope you don't mind me telling you there's a couple typos...theater and desert. (I would want someone to tell me). Hugs, Rhonda

Arlene Smith
Date: 1/21/2015 6:14:00 PM

Absolutely!.. Thank you, dear.. Got to stop rushing myself.. Hard to find much time... I always appreciate a chance to correct mistakes!.. Hugs.. Arlene

Jan Allison

Date: 1/21/2015 11:32:00 AM

I LOVE your take on the theme Arlene - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 1/21/2015 10:02:00 AM

A wonderful composition Arlene. a 7+. A topper for me. Love . Thanks for visiting my page and inspiring me.Your friend Rajat

Arlene Smith
Date: 1/21/2015 6:21:00 PM

Thank you, dear Rajat.. I hope to get to read more from your list soon!!.. Hugs.. Arlene

Monterey Sirak

Date: 1/21/2015 9:26:00 AM

Heaven on our minds, in our hearts, and found in the words of your wonderful poetry. I think you have a winner.

Arlene Smith
Date: 1/21/2015 6:20:00 PM

Thank you so much, sweetie..... Hugs.. Arlene..

Jean Omalley Polatnick

Date: 1/21/2015 7:46:00 AM

Your poem transported me and I felt each place your words described. Beautifully done - take the time to fix the typos - it's a winner!!

Arlene Smith
Date: 1/21/2015 6:16:00 PM

Thank you, dear Jean! I think Monterey didn't say anything because she just pointed out one on another poem of mine.. Didn't want me to think she was picking on me!! LOL!! Hugs.. Arlene