Heaven

Ray Of Light, Oh So Bright I Lay At Night And Look Up The Sky Wondering What Gods Heavens Like Heaven, A World Un compared To This Place I Want To See An Angels Face I Want To Feel The Pain Disappear I Want To Learn To Be More Sincere I Want The Sadness To Drain Away I Want To No Longer Be a Stray Ray Of Light, Oh So Bright I Want To Be In Heaven Tonigh

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Stephen Allen

Date: 3/13/2012 8:51:00 PM

Sad and yet so hopeful. I read this poem several times and liked it more with each read. Stephen.

Marina Calogero
Date: 3/14/2012 12:10:00 AM

thank you, i'm glad you enjoyed my poem

Vee Bdosa

Date: 3/13/2012 4:24:00 PM

Of course we can only imagine what Heaven is like, I would not like to see streets of gold and all of the greedy stuff like that. I want some trees flowers, birds singing, and me and you singing. Nice work, Marina. Ronnie

Marina Calogero
Date: 3/14/2012 12:11:00 AM

thank you Ronnie :)

Honestly J.T.

Date: 3/11/2012 12:37:00 PM

This is good write you have here and welcome to Poetry Soup- JH

Marina Calogero
Date: 3/14/2012 12:12:00 AM

Thank you

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/9/2012 6:12:00 AM

A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Marina. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol

Marina Calogero
Date: 3/14/2012 12:14:00 AM

Thank you, i hope you like my poem..i wrote this 6 years ago...thanks for the warm welcome. marina