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looking upwards I cry aloud-Venus disrobes,her cloak of cloud. Brian Strand 8Sept 'write it in one line'

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Date: 9/9/2011 9:41:00 AM
I am having a very enjoyable morning reading some very interesting and great poetry. I am glad I am reading yours today Brian. I am hoping you have a very wonderful weekend filled with inspiration. I need to find some inspiration myself this weekend. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/8/2011 6:23:00 PM
Tough competition in this contest. Outstanding Monoku Brian. Good luck my friend. CR
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Date: 9/8/2011 4:08:00 PM
Just wonderful Brian!
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Date: 9/8/2011 4:04:00 PM
Visually stunning Brian...a short line masterpiece!
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