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Heaven

Head and heart misaligned Happiness is denied Halting the flow of thought Horrors spawned by mind die Honing silence with bliss Hunger for God’s touch grows Heaven’s light dawns within

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 9/8/2023 11:08:00 AM

Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your "Heaven" Pleiades write again. "Wonderful" Have a fun day writing away..............

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 9/8/2023 6:43:00 PM

Thank you, dear Paula ~ have an enjoyable weekend ahead

Ink Empress

Date: 9/8/2023 2:37:00 AM

A very deep and moving write this is. Nailed it! Congratulations on winning. Well deserved really

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 9/8/2023 3:00:00 AM

Thank you, IE!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/8/2023 2:08:00 AM

- Congratulations on your win, U.S. :) - hugs

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 9/8/2023 3:00:00 AM

Thank you! :)

Kim Merryman

Date: 9/7/2023 6:04:00 PM

Nicely done, Unseeking Seeker! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 9/7/2023 9:46:00 PM

Thank you, Kim

Joseph May

Date: 9/7/2023 5:52:00 PM

Congrats on your win Seeker, Nicely penned

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 9/7/2023 9:46:00 PM

Thanks for hosting, JM :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 9/3/2023 10:41:00 AM

Your "Heaven" is a heavenly write. "Good Luck" Have a blessed/great ~ day/week..............

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/3/2023 4:10:00 AM

- A lovely Pleiades, U.S. ... best wishes in the contest :) - hugs

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 9/3/2023 10:24:00 AM

Thank you, Anne-Lise.

Silent One

Date: 9/3/2023 2:32:00 AM

Nice choice of word and you've done this form so well..

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 9/3/2023 3:21:00 AM

Thank you! :)