Heaven

Head and heart misaligned
Happiness is denied
Halting the flow of thought
Horrors spawned by mind die
Honing silence with bliss
Hunger for God’s touch grows
Heaven’s light dawns within
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Goldsmith Avatar
September 8, 2023 at 11:08 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your "Heaven" Pleiades write again. "Wonderful" Have a fun day writing away..............
Seeker Avatar
September 8, 2023 at 6:43 PM
Thank you, dear Paula ~ have an enjoyable weekend ahead
Empress Avatar
September 8, 2023 at 2:37 AM
A very deep and moving write this is. Nailed it! Congratulations on winning. Well deserved really
Seeker Avatar
September 8, 2023 at 3:00 AM
Thank you, IE!
Andresen Avatar
September 8, 2023 at 2:08 AM
- Congratulations on your win, U.S. :) - hugs
Seeker Avatar
September 8, 2023 at 3:00 AM
Thank you! :)
Merryman Avatar
September 7, 2023 at 6:04 PM
Nicely done, Unseeking Seeker! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
Seeker Avatar
September 7, 2023 at 9:46 PM
Thank you, Kim
May Avatar
September 7, 2023 at 5:52 PM
Congrats on your win Seeker, Nicely penned
Seeker Avatar
September 7, 2023 at 9:46 PM
Thanks for hosting, JM :)
Goldsmith Avatar
September 3, 2023 at 10:41 AM
Your "Heaven" is a heavenly write. "Good Luck" Have a blessed/great ~ day/week..............
Andresen Avatar
September 3, 2023 at 4:10 AM
- A lovely Pleiades, U.S. ... best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
Seeker Avatar
September 3, 2023 at 10:24 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise.
One Avatar
September 3, 2023 at 2:32 AM
Nice choice of word and you've done this form so well..
Seeker Avatar
September 3, 2023 at 3:21 AM
Thank you! :)
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