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Heaven

Heaven I have often gazed off into the distance, Dancing happily in the mist. Children bouncing on fuffly clouds. Their wings trucked neatly down their spines . Playing ring o'roses and pat a cake. This place looks peaceful. I often visit it in my dreams. Dreams are often vivid. Where you can feel the peace the calm in your being. written by davina 2019

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Date: 12/6/2022 12:24:00 PM
A dream of heaven would be something else! Love this and the imagery that you produce through your emotive words. Always, Laura
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Date: 9/7/2020 7:33:00 AM
I have gazed off into the distance more times than I can count. The lines "Children bouncing on fuffly clouds. Their wings trucked neatly down their spines" is so aesthetic. Thanks for sharing................peace!
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Davina Browne
Date: 9/10/2020 11:28:00 AM
thank you ricky

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