Heaven

Heaven

I have often gazed off into the distance, 
Dancing happily in the mist. 
Children bouncing on fuffly clouds. 
Their wings trucked neatly down their spines .  
Playing ring o'roses and pat a cake.
This place looks peaceful.
I often visit it in my dreams. 
Dreams are often vivid.
Where you can feel the peace the calm in your being.

written by davina 2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Breidenthal Avatar
December 6, 2022 at 12:24 PM
A dream of heaven would be something else! Love this and the imagery that you produce through your emotive words. Always, Laura
Browne Avatar
September 26, 2025 at 1:38 PM
Thank you Laura big hugs
Evans Avatar
September 7, 2020 at 7:33 AM
I have gazed off into the distance more times than I can count. The lines "Children bouncing on fuffly clouds. Their wings trucked neatly down their spines" is so aesthetic. Thanks for sharing................peace!
Browne Avatar
September 10, 2020 at 11:28 AM
thank you ricky
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