Heaven

Whatever dies is sure to be missed
Its void reclaimed by an optimist
At the end of the day
We shall all fade away
To a Heaven where dreams still subsist

deathdreamheavenlimerick

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Judith Kerttula

February 7, 2019 at 4:18 AM

Love your limericks! This is one of my favorites.

Jennifer Proxenos

December 12, 2018 at 11:56 AM

What a wonderful Limerick Rico! It has an aura surrounding it! My sincere heartfelt wishes for you and yours Rico over the Christmas season. Yasou, Jennifer

Lindsay Laurie

December 10, 2018 at 10:56 PM

G'day Rico … for they who believe in the spirit world Rico, this is a great limerick - Lindsay

Carolyn Devonshire

December 10, 2018 at 9:37 AM

Although people sometimes leave our world with little notice, I'm one of those "optimists" who believes even these lonely souls receive a warm welcome in heaven. A thought-provoking limerick, Rico! Hugs, Carolyn

Rico Leffanta

December 10, 2018 at 1:31 PM

So many Soupers were writing about death at Christmas, I thought I would post an alternate view. Mahalo! Aloha! Rico