Heaven

Whatever dies is sure to be missed
Its void reclaimed by an optimist
At the end of the day
We shall all fade away
To a Heaven where dreams still subsist
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 2/7/2019 4:18:00 AM
Love your limericks! This is one of my favorites.
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Date: 12/12/2018 11:56:00 AM
What a wonderful Limerick Rico! It has an aura surrounding it! My sincere heartfelt wishes for you and yours Rico over the Christmas season. Yasou, Jennifer
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Date: 12/10/2018 10:56:00 PM
G'day Rico … for they who believe in the spirit world Rico, this is a great limerick - Lindsay
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Date: 12/10/2018 9:37:00 AM
Although people sometimes leave our world with little notice, I'm one of those "optimists" who believes even these lonely souls receive a warm welcome in heaven. A thought-provoking limerick, Rico! Hugs, Carolyn
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 12/10/2018 1:31:00 PM
So many Soupers were writing about death at Christmas, I thought I would post an alternate view. Mahalo! Aloha! Rico
Date: 12/9/2018 9:30:00 PM
Rico, Rico, Rico, this limerick is so uplifting and truthful! Nice!
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 12/10/2018 1:29:00 PM
Mahalo nui loa, Caren! Aloha! Rico
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