Heaven

Broken clouds allowed moonlight
onto the bed where I lay thinking
My bones ache, my hands 
grow more crooked every day,
To use them is painful, very
This hospital bed is where 
my life continues, cats
on each side
Food is hard to come by
but I have little appetite any more
Best night's rest came when
diabetic coma kept me out
for twelve hours
Fear knits a cowl over
my face and my heart dances
One day I will be no more
Oh, God, let there a heaven be
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gutmacher Avatar
December 1, 2018 at 4:29 PM
Sherry -- I'm hoping this was just a write, and not anything personal. It was extremely well done, but like I said, disturbing if it's you. Very real. jon
Rodrigues Avatar
November 27, 2018 at 8:09 AM
A heart wrenching write.
Horsman Avatar
November 27, 2018 at 6:50 AM
Heaven will need all the poets it can get, and Sherry, i bet you have more than earned your ticket to be admitted..love the poem,
Krutsinger Avatar
November 26, 2018 at 4:09 PM
The picture of this is complete. I feel we are getting closer to knowing the truths every day, and this poem reminded me of this thought. Nice!
Rose  Avatar
November 26, 2018 at 3:53 PM
I do believe heaven exists, I have no doubt, One day all pain will be replaced by warmth and love, I have enjoyed reading your poem Sherry, Hugs
Green Avatar
November 26, 2018 at 1:57 PM
Such a desperate and aching piece of writing. I shared this pain as I read. Nicely done.
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